[✗] My application for being whitelisted

[Doctor_Enasni 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Doctor_Enasni

How old are you?: 16

What timezone are you in?: Central Time Zone

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Of Course

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: “Excessive trolling or use of 'memes' in roleplay are disallowed”

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I can not start with magic? why not? i spent 40 minutes creating a brand new skin, backstory, and character itself!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend recommended it to me, thats why i know nothing, but i would like to, as roleplaying is one of my strongsuits

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): I don't have any...

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying, as i see it, is telling a story.  It is not just pretending to be a character, it's living as your character.  You can't just be “A dark-elf that knows magic” or a “human that fights with a sword”.  You are “a wise 673 year old Dark-elf that has practiced magic for centuries upon him” or “a young 19 year old man that has always been fascinated with the sword, and has practiced it mostly all his life”.  Roleplaying is a story, not a character.

What is metagaming?: It is doing something to help your friend that your character would not be able to do as he wouldn't know your friend would be in trouble.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:It is basically god-mode, choosing what happens before anybody has a chance to react.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Adam Rellik

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.):

(where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Adam Rellik has come from a far land.  So far, in fact, that he might as well have traveled planes of existence.  He came from an immortal plane.  He was a spirit there, and had longed to go back to the mortal planes, and the deity Apohet had granted that to him generations  after Adam had passed for the first time, in the battle of banishing Ibless.

Apohet had started him in the body of an ill child in the farlands.  The weird thing about this child and his family that differentiated them from the rest was that they had lighter skin.  The way that he was cured was never known by the parents, but they were grateful.  So the father, Jack Rellik, was the main guard and fighting teacher of the town they lived in, so adam was taught to fight.  At the age of 16, he decided that he wanted more than the small town that he lived in, and had heard about the city of Felsen, and decided to run from home and see the new lands that would behold to him.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He absolutely hates people that pick on others.  He loves elven cooking.  And he mainly fights with blunt weapons(fists, staves, ect.)

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) The greatest fighter alive

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Fighting, has been since his pastlife.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Magic and intelligience.  He is really good at fighting and strategizing, but other than that he always fights through everything.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) adam is 6’8, wieghs 230(pure muscle), and has a rather bulk appearance  He has a sword scar in his left side .  and his hair is a deep red.  His eyes are a dark musky turquoise.

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Greetings, Applicant;

You have been Denied for the following reason;

 

• Your definition for metagaming is a little bit unclear. Please explain more what it means. You can use the link below to get a more clear idea of what it is, but please do NOT copy-paste the definitions, as the Application Team would love to hear them out from your own words;
• Your biography states that your character has come to the isles of Axios from an immortal plane as a spirit, originating from another human who fought in the "War of Iblees"(?). This is not very appropriate for your biography, as you will need to have a simple-born character when applying to the server, instead of a conjured or et cetera ones, please change that part about your biography;
• Fighting style is not a personality trait;
• Your biography is short and vague. This part of your application is especially important since it gives the Application Team an opportunity to get to know your character. Please have a more detailed view of what your character has gone through, what changed their view, how they reacted to important events and et cetera;
• Your weaknesses part states that your character is not intelligent but he is good at strategizing, which is a major logical contradiction;
• A 230 pound, 6'8 human at the age of 18 is not very possible, if not impossible. Please be a little more humble with your character's physical traits;
• I have noticed that your character is almost entirely based on fighting. His strengths, weaknesses, biography, physicality is entirely based around fighting. The Application Team suggests that you come up with more than one aspect about your character, as it will create unique-ness and will be more appropriate and entertaining to roleplay as.
• Your strengths and weaknesses are vague, and only consists of "fighting". Please include more strengths, as well as mental strengths and weaknesses. And "magic" is not a weakness.

You may re-apply after waiting for 6 hours.

Please don't hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs, accessible from my profile, for any questions or concerns you have. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.