[✗] [Pending] My Whitelist Application

[ThePizzaPlayz 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: ThePizzaPlayz

How old are you?: 10 (11 soon)

What timezone are you in?: EST

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The one where bad behavior disrupts the flow of role play

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Threw a friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): im very very sorry i have applied before and sorry again but i cant find application ;(

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be white listed without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is taking the role of a person/creature and acting them out and talking too

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using any information outside of any characters life

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Powergaming is a character doing something that in real life they wouldn't be able to do

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Virak

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 28

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) My character was born in a small village in the hills, Also my character was traveling for miles upon miles trying to find somewhere to stay after his village was burned to the ground, finally he found where all the lived villagers lived, Felsen. My character was born in 1542 and was small when born. He has brown hair but in the summer sunlight it would turn a brighter brown. His eyes are very dark blue and sometimes fade to a light green but rarely though, He loves exploring in the forest but needs to be careful because when he was 17 he almost ran straight into a hoard of orcs barely escaping

He never told any of the villagers about his mothers death or how the village was burned, He kept it to himself up until he was 20 where he told a villager that raised him, He regretted it straight away because the villager passes out but was fine after. Every 3 days he practices bow and sword but sadly lost his sword after throwing it in a raging river on accident but the nearby blacksmith in Felsen crafted him a new one, It was made out of steel and had a very sharp tip, He practiced every 2 days now because he loved the sword so much but he couldn't practice everyday because he had to farm the crops the days before his sword training days.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) My character is bad tempered and a bit impatient hes also a bit of a procasternater. He dislikes swimming (Because he isnt good at it :D) and likes melee combat.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) My character really wants to become a great guard and defend people from danger

Strengths/Talents: My character is very good with the bow and the sword and is ok at fist fights and is also good at repairing swords and minor damage in houses and other building

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) My character isnt great at swimming one bit he really needs to work on it i would give him a 5/10, My character could work on prounoucing some words

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) My character has a scar on his chest after a log of wood fell on him in the fire at his village. My character is 7.1 ft tall, My characters hair color is brown but turns light brown in the the summer sunlight

Skin: Here is my skin http://imgur.com/a/RPZ1N thank you very much for reading my application really appreciate it ;D

[Bvie 1754]

PENDING

 

Your application is pending due to the following reason(s):

 

Your power-emoting definition is weak. Please provide an example.

 

Your biography is missing 3 specific references to server lore. Please add more.

 

Your height is too tall for a Human.

 

Here are some links to help you resolve these issues:

 

Power-Emoting:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

Vailor Lore:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

Human Lore:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

 

You have twenty four hours to make this edit - you do not need to make a second post! Just edit it! Please be sure to PM me once your edits are complete.

[Bvie 1754]

DENIED

 

Your application has been denied due to the following reason(s):

 

Corrections were not made in the allotted time.

 

Please reapply and include said corrections.

[Bvie 1754]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.