[✗] Crip56's Application

[crip56 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: crip56

How old are you?: 16

What timezone are you in?: CET

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I do

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No, I understand the rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it from a other player

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):/

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes, I did

 

 

Definitions

 

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplay, or RP for short, is the act of playing the role of and acting as a character would rather than yourself

What is metagaming?:  In it’s simplest form, metagaming is using informations outside of your characters life to use them as guideance Ig/IC

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Power-emoting in it's simplest form is the act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do.

 

In-Character Information
 

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Marian van Wite

Character’s sex: (male or female?): Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.): Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!): 27

Biography : "What was it? That dream again?" Asked my friend. "I have them more often lately."

Marian was born in a small village. He was just 7 when a man killed his parents while they were working on the fields. He didn't even know until he vent to find them. He found them lying on the ground full of blood. "Mom? Dad? Did you fell asleep again while you were working? Mom!? Dad?!" He started crying as other people noticed him. The other people saw the blood and started running to Marian. At that day he was left alone. He had no more family alive. Other people didn't want him. One day he went to a Church in the village. He prayed for his mother and Father. His mother and father were very religious an so was Marian. He went in the Church and started praying until the Priest noticed him. He asked the woman on the other side of the Pews if this is the boy that lost his parents. Day sad that he is that boy. The Priest came to Marian and asked him if he wants to live withing the Church as his adopted "Sun". OF course he said yes. Few years passed after his parents death. He dreams every night about there corpses speaking to him and asking him to help. He is now the age of 15 and he still lives within the Church. "Father Gascoigne? Is it time for me to go further? Should I say or Should I go?" Marian said

"Its up to you my boy." That night Marian thought the whole night about it. The next day while he was working in the garden of the Church. He saw another boy his age getting also adopted. He asked Father Gascoigne: "Who is the new guy?"

"This will be your new brother. He suffered the same fate as you. His parents were killed by another man. But he killed him to so he came to me to for absolution for the killing of his parents murderer."

Marian walked to the boy. "" How did he looked like? The murderer!"

The boy was surprised."Aren't you ask me for the name first?"

"No need. How did he looked like?!"

"I'm Zack, Whats your name?" Marian opened his eyes widely "Really? I see you don't to talk about that and that's alright. But how did he look like?!"

"Just shut up. I'm not in a mood for that." The Pries was watched all of this from a distance."They are going to be good friend." And he started laughing. 

"What are you laughing at?"Marian and Zack shouted together.

When we reached the age of 27. We left the Church to find the Cult that was ordering to kill innocent people.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?): My character doesn't really like any kind of people. But mostly doesn't like the kind of people that want to help every people in the world. The good kind people. He doesn't like to talk too much. He cant stand any kind of alcohol. He is not very friendly. He doesn't trust anyone even if it is the king.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?): Get the most fame of just being the good guy.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) He is skilled in the art of dual wielding swords and the bow. He knows a lot of holy and unholy things. He is really agile.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?): He needs to work on saying the right thing to other people. He doesn't sleep well at night so he is drowsy every day

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) He has Light blue eyes and light skin.. Normal high . Brown hair.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Bvie 1754]

DENIED

 

Your application is denied due to the following reasons(s):

 

You have plagiarized your definitions and have not put them into your own words.

This is your first warning. Plagiarize again and you will be banned from applying for one week per plagiarized item.

 

Your biography is missing 3 specific references to server lore. Use the LotC Wiki to find out more about the server and incorporate it into your biography, such as places and events.

 

Your character being skilled with dual swords and has no relevance of a 'holy man' learning this.

 

 

Due to plagiarisms, you must wait 24 hours before reapplying. Use this time to better your application, understanding of the rules of LotC, and the lore that acts as the foundation of the server.  

[Bvie 1754]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.