[✗] [Pending] My Whitelist Application

[NotAPan 3052]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: ItsJustKaz

How old are you?: 13

What timezone are you in?:   UTC+08:00

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I do know.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I agree to all the rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Power Gaming (Most annoying of all)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No i dont think so

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: By a youtuber named ProbablyNotAPanda

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): I dont have any past application (dont know the meaning sorry)

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes I just logged in before applying.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: To act as a person that is made up by you and trying to act it as your in real life.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when your character knows information that you know or learned ooc, but you've never learned or know IC.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Forcing people to roleplay without their decesion.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Kaz Duliur

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Farfolk Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 21 years old

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Kaz Duliur was a orphan born in an unknown village,while he was still a kid,his parents died by an murder,the murderer is his own brother Flaix Duliur,Flaix killed his parents because on an arguement on his money and to buy better weapons for himself,his brother later escaped and from that day on Kaz never saw his own brother ever again. Kaz Duliur then became a orphan.Because of that he isn't great on many things like crafting and survival.But he never gave up,his goal is try to find a village to settle down in.He wanted to be a knight of a city to protect the people as they are his family.He learns simple rules of the nature by staying in the wilderness. He tries to live which is like a punishment of the nature. He suffers from hunger,cold,sickness,and some other things.But he will fight for the sake of himself and his unknown parents. But one day while Kaz Duliur was wandering in the forest he saw someone through the bushes. It was his brother after all Flaix Duliur,Kaz quickly take out his sword afraid that Flaix will attack him. Flaix drag out his dagger and trying to stab Kaz neck. Kaz later think back about his parents,his father,his mother.This was a battle for them he swore that he will live on and kill the murderer.He threw a rock and hit his brothers head.He jump to him and take the sword to stab him.He cut his throat and seperated his body and his head.He hides the body later on so nobody knows that Flaix Duliur was dead. He continues to travel on his way to a city. He found it but he feel wrong,he killed his own brother.Which he always wear a hoodie to hide himself from light.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He have great anger issues and is always active. He have a habid of scratching his own hand while he is nervous.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He wanted to be the knight of a city

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Sword and Shield fighting,and spying. And on crafting weapons or armour,he is really good at hiding in any spot.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) His weakness is his lack on knowledge,his anger issue,and being impatient almost all the time,and ofcourse his biggest fear of his brother murder.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Serious looking man with a hoodie on all the times with blue eyes.

Skin: https://gyazo.com/de3332ca91a21d380a766ef38aa902fd

[Argontum 153]

Under review...

[Argontum 153]

Greetings, applicant.

Your application has been put to pending. This simply means that your app is good! However, this app is given the said verdict for the following reasons. Please make these changes in the next 24 hours and send a message over the forums after you have done so. Failing to do so will result in the denial of your application;

 

•  Your biography is a part where applicants get a chance to introduce the backstory of their characters to the server. The Application Team expects applicants to write two, lengthy paragraphs, clearly stating how their character found themselves arriving at the islands of Axios. Your biography is short and vague. What happened to your character in the past? What events changed them? How did they react to certain things? Also, expand more on the server lore. Include some events that might have happened while your character lived. The lore can be found here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
• Your metagaming definition is vague. You may use the thread below to help understand the definitions, but remember. Do NOT copy every single word! The AT would to hear them in your own words.

 

• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera;

 

Do not hesitate to send me a message if you need help or have any questions.

[Argontum 153]

Greetings applicant;

Your application has been denied, but do not fret! This does not mean the end. The reason for this denial would be the inability of your application to meet up to our standards. If you follow and complete the changes I lay out for you, your next application might get accepted!

• Your metagaming definition is plagiarized. When writing out definitions please make sure to put them in your own words. We need to know you understand these definitions enough to know when you need to apply them in game. Definitions can be found here, but remember, do NOT copy them from word to word;

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours from the point of this denial.

Do not hesitate to contact me if you need help or have any questions.

[Argontum 153]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.