[✗] Rentricard Leino

[Relalt of Givia 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:xXChe_GuevaraXx

How old are you?:14

What timezone are you in?:EEST

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:cyber bully

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: forums

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:Roleplaying is like acting but trugh games.

What is metagaming?:role play gaming

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Power emoting is like your character stats to be overpowered

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Rentricard Leino

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:human

Character’s age:22

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.):Leino is a bastard who lieves with his mother in Courlan forrest in a small hut.When he was 13 a group of men were harassing his mother so he taked a thick branch and started fighting the men but it was too late,his mother was dead.The group of men were aproaching the kid but a brave man with a long sword apeard out of nowhere neutralizing the enemy.The man gifted Leino his sword and said:One day you will be a fighter just like me,and remember killing only brings truble.

Years have passed and Leino trained everyday to become a "hero" just like the brave man.He is travelling in the Illes of Vailor seeking revenge of finding the men that killed his mother and "fighting for those who cannot"

Personality Traits:He takes long walks in the forrests thinking about his past,he likes fisshing and hunting

Ambitions:He wants to be like the man who saved his life

Strengths/Talents:He is very good at weilding the sword the man he gaved him.He is aggile and can defeat tanky enemies.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:As agile as he is as easy is for him to get deafeated due to his low vitality and armor

Appearance:He is 5 ft blonde hair and has one of his left eye cut by his companion.His companion turned out to be a traitor and Leino travelles more alone and has trust issues.

Skin: http://imgur.com/a/WqyW9

[garentoft 9265]

 

Heya, applicant;

Your application has been denied!

 

• Your application lacks all of the out of character information, this is especially important as it tells us all of the important things that we need to know about you out-of-character wise, such as whether you’ve logged onto the server yet and what your minecraft name is. Please fill this in next time.

• Your definitions of powergaming and metagaming are VERY incorrect. This thread can be used to get information on the definitions, but please remember not to be plagiarise them.

• Your biography lacks three references to the server lore, and the current references are incorrect to the current state of roleplay, as Vailor has been abandoned and Courland no longer exists. Please use the wiki to get more information about server lore. Also, your biography is very cliche, it’d be lovely to write something original and creative as it’s something we greatly appreciate on the server in general.

• Your character’s personality, ambitions and strengths/weaknesses are very vague. These tell us a lot about your character, and therefore I’d like you to expand more on these things. They’re all also very cliche, and as stated before we appreciate originality and creativity.

• While this isn’t something that’s a basis for denying you on, you have quite a lot of grammatical mistakes in your application. I’d love it if you could fix those as roleplay is text-based and therefore the main form of communication.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

If you have any questions, please send me a PM via the forums.

[garentoft 9265]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.