[✗] My application as a Member.

[MagnusDK 0]

Out of character information

 

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Magnusdk123

 

 

How old are you?:14

 

 

What timezone are you in?:Denmark in the Nothern part of Europe and it’s GMT+01.

 

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):I am aware and happy for that, even though I am over 13 years old myself. 

 

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:I agree on your rules and I have readen them carefully through.

 

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:I agree most with the rule about not being hostile against others.

 

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No there really is not, I understand them very well or at least I feel and think so myself.

 

 

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I saw a youtube trailer about your server and thought I would check it out, because I like RPG servers a lot and here I am now.

 

 

 

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):This is my first application.

 

 

 

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):I have logged into it.

 

 

 

 

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?:For me roleplaying is, when you act like you’re a certain person, class or race. from a story and starts developing into that person, race or specific class. You start interacting with other people like the race or class would do, then you get to experience adventures with the it and create new ways, that you’ll need to follow and set your own mark on.

 

 

What is metagaming?:It’s where I for example said an information that my race or specific character would not know about, and use it to affect the ingame play, which would give me an unfair advantage.

 

 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: It’s where you force your emotes on someone else, for example I stab my sword into Nicklas, but the right thing to do, was to give him a chance to react with this: Magnus tries to stab the sword into Nicklas’s chest.

 

 

In character information

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Magnus.

 

 

Character’s sex: (male or female?): Male

 

 

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.): Kharajyr

 

 

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!): 20

 

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.): I come from Athera and I was born in 1527 and I have traveled to the other races areas, where I will kill them to feed my appetite, my goal is to hunt and kill other races, so the orc culture can flourish and so I can protect the orcs against other races.

 

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks? habits? likes and dislikes?): I like to fight a lot with other races than the orcs and I like to kill and eat a lot of flesh afterwards. I dislike to hurt any of its own species and is bound by the honor of being an orc.

 

 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?): I aspire to be like the ancestor of all the orcs Krug, but to be it it in my own way.

 

 

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?): I am very strong and my instincts are the same as any other orcs, which enables me to sense danger very effective.

 

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?): I have a very big appetite that I need to convey, which does that I can be very risky in my attacks on other races.

 

 

Appearance: (what does your character look like?  how tall are they? hair color? scars?): I am 13 feet tall and I have a lot of scars as any other orcs, because Krug the first ancestor got very hurt, I have scars as he got., also I have gotten armor made our of leather, but I haven’t gotten any hair.

 

 

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.): http://imgur.com/a/wBxLY

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your application is strewn with typos and errors.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and confusing. You mention your character being an orc, yet your official race you put down as Kharajyr.

 

-Your character's biography includes no server lore aside from a mention of Vailor.

 

-Your character's biography is far too short, and isnt really a biography.... Just an incoherent listing of odd aspirations.

 

-13 feet tall is WAY TOO TALL for an orc.

 

-...Just because one's ancestor is physically scarred doesnt mean a child would be born with scars... IF your grandfather was cut on the brow- you wouldnt have a cut on your brow to.

 

-You need to balance your character's skills and weaknesses.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[tilly 5115]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.