whitelist application [✗] [Pending] MY WHITELIST APPLICATION - Second Attempt

[FaerieLeFay 0]

Player Information.

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Lavissa_Renaeh

How old are you?:16

What timezone are you in?: UTC/GMT

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: General. I like the one that says that you have to stay in character all time while playing.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Recommendations. I have also seen that the server is very popular and rated as one of the best servers.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): Yes: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/150033-%E2%9C%97-my-whitelist-application/#comment-1417450

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes, I have.

 

Definitions:

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is is when a person acts or  assumes the role of a fictional character, players are encharged of creating a story and also making desicions.

What is metagaming?: It's when the player uses information that doesn't belong to the character or to the storyline, information from the real life.

What is  power-emoting (powergaming)?: Power-emoting  is when a character does something that he wouldn't be able to do on real life or in game.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Lavissa Renaeh

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 18

Biography : (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Lavissa was born in a kingdom across the ocean, this kingdom is located in the coast of the eastern sea up in the mountains. She comes from a very important family in the society known for they're ancesters that were warriors, magicians, sailors, etc. She was born in a period known as the Golden Age (1000-1700). When the Summer came the kingdom was taken by thieves and they're leader looked for a young lady to marry, he found Lavissa and wanted to force her to marry him, so the next day her parents travelled with her to city known for being visited by sailors, they helped her scape in a small boat. After sailing for several days she saw a land, it was the land of Anxios; they knew that she would be safe there. After 3 days they left the boat on a shore and Lavissa found herself on a beach near the city of Lin'sulan where she received help from some elves. She spent some weeks in Lin'sulan in the house of an elf that was related to her. Every morning she would go to the library to learn more about this land, stories and legends, etc.

One day when she was near a lake in the outsides of the city an Orc from Gorkil  that was hiding in the forest kidnapped her and took her to a desert, they took her as a hostage to threaten the elven comunity. She could scape after being helped by an Ent. Therefore Lavissa wanted to learn how to use the old abilities from her ancestors to have contact and communication with plants, animals and forest spirits (It's a dream that she has), principally near the city of Linadria, where she used to go very often to visit some dryads that lived there and Always delighted her with histories and show her they're abilities.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Lavissa is kind, peaceful, friendly, generous and sometimes a very sensible elf. She likes to walk in the woods to have contact with nature and also seat on the beach to see the sunset. She likes rainy days. She is vegetarian since she is one with nature so she eats vegetables and fruits, but mostly fruits. In her spare time she likes to read, principally books about magic because one day she wants to be a great magician. She dislikes fighting or arguing with other people or staying in the dark for too much time. AShe is an Elf she admires other races and loves to know and learn more and more about they're cultures and society.

 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)  She wants to be a leader to help people , a recognized Elf of great importance, someone to be remembered. She also wants to be a great magician (she reads books about magic and she always gets fascinated.) 

 

Strengths/Talents:  Lavissa is a really good archer and also a really good hider. Known for her great memory and cleaverness. She's a musician as well, she likes to sing and a lot of people describe her voice like the sound of a gentle breeze.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) She in not really good at fighting with a sword, she needs to practice.

 

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Lavissa's skin is quite pale and bright like the Sunrise, she has light blue eyes but sometimes in the sunlight they can look greenish-jade. Her hair is Golden like the sun and long and wavy in the tips. Normally she wears long dresses, jewels and sometimes flower crowns. She doesn't have scars. She is not as tall as other Elves, she is quite petite. A lot of creatures feel attracted by her beauty and by her way of being.

 

Skin: : http://imgur.com/1wJpBxU

 

P.S: I would like to thank you ADM team for giving me a second chance and thank you for reading, I hope I pass this time.

                                                                                                                                                                             Lavissa  Renaeh

[garentoft 9265]

 

Hey, applicant;

Your application is pending.

 

Fear not, pending is far from the end, only means there’s a few changes have to be made before you’ll be accepted.

 

• Your character’s birthplace, “A kingdom across the sea”, is not correct lore-wise as such a place doesn’t exist, furthermore you say that she was born in a period called the golden age from 1000-1700, the current year of Lord of the Craft is 1574. Please change your character's birthplace to somewhere that actually exists in lore, such as Haelun’or. Here’s a link to the wiki for more lore.

• Your definitions of metagaming and powergaming are partially incorrect, please fix this. Feel free to use this thread to get more information about the definitions, and remember not to copy as we’d love to hear it in your own words.

 

You have 24 hours to make the required changes.

Once you’re done OR if you have any questions, shoot me a PM via the forums.

[garentoft 9265]

Applicant posted a new application with the required changes made, it will be overlooked shortly.

 

[garentoft 9265]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.