[✗] [Pending] Clipcy's Whitelist Application

[Clipcy 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Clipcy

 

How old are you?:13

 

What timezone are you in?:Newyork Eastern Time Zone

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes and i am perfectly fine with that.

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No metagaming or powergaming

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):None

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend

 

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes i have been online once.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:The act of playing a specific role.

 

What is metagaming?:Metagaming- Using external factors to affect the game like skype.

 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Powergaming- The act of declaring that somthing was succesfull with out the other playes prerogative

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

 

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Edmond Silver

 

Character’s sex: (male or female?)male

 

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?;

Edmond Silver was born outside Felsenin the year 1550 he lived there with his brother Elric Silver, his

mother, and his father. Durring Edmond’s early years he lived as a simply farmer’s son, dident do much special but the one thing that alwase s

tuck out in his life was his fathers weird cruelty, it was rumored

that his father lated joined the Gold Corps as they were known, but Edmond never knew, as one day he was out with his brother on the

road, they were going to the Cloud Temple to look what the auctioneers were selling.

 

As they were walking Edmond smelled this weird, disgusting stench, he covered his nose, his brother with a grim face said “its a battlefield,” as he pointed at

a dead body, he wore a black and red tabbard, rebels. Soon fog enveloped the two, Edmond saw a light in the fog and heard “Help.. Help..”, So he whent towards the light, and he walked and walked, he never found the figure, he never knew what the light was, but soon out of the fog came a man, it was one of them in the black and red tabbards, he took the child and he ran, Edmond looked behind him and saw

the light.
 In his later life he found out what happened in that fog was a boggen, however he never found out what happened to his brother, he must still be out there somewhere. It turns out the rebels he had known as a child were called the Dreadlands, he lived there the rest of his life and rode with them on there boats to Axios, never knowing what happened to his family.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Is a gambaler and easy to anger,more easaly angered by greedy peaple.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)A person peaple can trust a soldier to serve under a king and aid him be the kings shield

 

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at)Strengths are leading in battle.Good stratagist and dexterist.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)While being a good stratagist didnt have a good education and get very angry easaly

 

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)5'8 Black hair Blue eyes a scar on his elbow from when he was young.

Skin

[garentoft 9265]

 

Hey, applicant;

Your application is pending!

 

Fear not, pending is not the end, there’s only a few changes I require you to make on this application.

 

• Your personality traits only include likes and dislikes. A personality trait is something like being stubborn, kind or arrogant, maybe even using your hands to put emphasis on your words. Your current personality traits are also very vague, please write more on this.

• Your character's strengths/weaknesses are quite weird, being able to ride a unicycle and juggle? Huh? Also your weakness, doing things without thinking about them is actually a personality trait. But then again, they’re pretty vague, please write more here.

• You have quite a lot of grammatical mistakes, while it’s not required, I’d love it if you could fix those.

 

You have 24 hours to make the required changes.

If you have any questions or you finish doing the changes, send me a PM via the forums.

[garentoft 9265]

 

Hey, applicant;

Your application has been denied!

 

• You failed to make the required changes, all you’ve made where some really minor changes, such as adding “is a gambler” to your personality traits, which isn’t even a personality trait. While you’ve made your strengths/weaknesses more realistic and less joke-like, they’re unoriginal, we praise originality and creativity on here. You’ve also put one of your personality traits as both a personality trait and a weaknesses.

• I also recommended your brush up on your grammar a little, while your mistakes are not that big, the main form of communication is through text, and therefore mistakes can simply make roleplay hard to understand.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

If you have any questions send me a PM via the forums.

[garentoft 9265]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.