[✗] White-list Application.

[TheTechMage 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Coltseek.

How old are you?: 15

What timezone are you in?: Central Time Zone.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule I agree with the most with Is no powergaming whatsoever.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My brother told me about It.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes.

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is where one pretends to be somebody else, the goal is usually to tell a story, and to have fun.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is your roleplay character knowing information he/she has no way of knowing.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Powergaming is the act of controlling the roleplay situation, by saying: *he would swing his sword, cutting Luke's hand off". Instead say *He would swing his sword, Aiming for his left hand*

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Thorn Kilkenny.

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male.

Character’s race: Farfolk (human).

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 22.

Biography

Born and raised near Sanctuary, Thorn, after turning 18 went to the town of Lorraine to study. Only to discover that intellectual achievement was not his strong suit. He then attempted to become a soldier in the Orenian army, he was not a very good shot with a bow, nor was he any good with a sword. A friend he met in training said he should try working with his hands because he had a punishment detail of fixing arrows, he did it better than most of the army smiths. From Lorraine he traveled to the Orenian capital Felsen to become a smith. His childhood was a dark one. His mom died in childbirth, his dad was clubbed to death by orcs, when Thorn was 5. Thorn was taken in by a tribe of wood elves who raised him like their own. The reason he went to school and soldier training is to try to pay the Wood Elves back for their kindness.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He acts more like a Wood Elf than a human, he has a nervous tick with his left hand, he loves to work with his hands, he hates shooting a bow and swinging a sword and he loves to read.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Thorn aspires to be the best artisan/smith that he can be.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Thorn needs to work on his sword skills and his speed

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Thorn is '6'3 has a large burn scar on the right side of his face, has blond hair black eye, the other eye is completely blind due to the burn.

Skin: would It be possible for me to email somebody the screenshot? otherwise could I show somebody in game. The attaching files is not working for me, so if either of those things would work, tell me, otherwise sorry for the trouble.

   

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Biography is one of the most important parts of your application, as it gives the Application Team a chance to get to know your character! We would like to learn about what they went through, how they viewed events that happened to them, what changed their views on things, et cetera. Your biography is vague and short. Please write at least two lengthy paragraphs of well written biography;
• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way, also beyond physicality. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera;
• The 'personality traits' part of your application is supposed to project how your character behaves. Yours only consists of his likes and dislikes. Please do include some actual personality traits like being stingy, cold-blooded or et cetera;
• Your application does not contain enough strengths and weaknesses, please include at least three of each;

 

You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

 

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.