David_Shadows 1 Share Posted October 3, 2016 What’s your Minecraft account name?: David_Shadows How old are you?:13 What timezone are you in?:Central time Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):None How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A old freind Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes i have Characters name: David Shadows Characters sex: Male Characters race: Elf Characters age: 57 Biography: David was born in a forest and never had been accepted anywhere. He trained himself with a bow and a sword. He travels a lot and doesn't stay anywhere for a very long time. He has no family or very many friends. David lives alone in a forest and doesn't have very many visitors but does watch the animals. He has always been fond of wolves though. He has not lived very long and he watches the years go by in a flash. He goes out to taverns once in a while and does socialize a bit but everyone just ignores him. He has a new journey ahead of him though even though he doesn't expect it. Personality traits: David likes snow and wolves but doesn't like having to deal with annoying people. Ambitions: David doesn't have many goals but he likes magic and usually practices with his bow and sword. Strengths/Talents: David is very good at building, crafting, using a bow, and using a sword. Weaknesses/inabilities: he has to work on magic and not being so shy in public. Appearance: David has black hair, golden eye color, his hair covers one eye that is pure white, He wears green most of the time. Skin: (I cant seem to be able to put my skin on this but i will put it as my Icon for my account you can see it there. I am so sorry) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remyy 952 Share Posted October 3, 2016 Pending Your application has been put on PENDING, but do not fret as this only means you only need to make several changes to your application before you may be accepted! please make the changes below within 24 hours, or you will be denied. Your biography contains no lore! please add at least three pieces of lore in your biography. Lore is a important part of LoTC, as it keeps your character in it! without it, it is like they do not exist! Please reference to the Wiki to find options! Your character is said to have, golden eyes- this alone is super rare, and not many have it, thus it would be preferable if you changed it- but also black hair with white covering one eye. This look would be rather odd- because his hair must have been dyed, yet just that one side. How would he keep up with this? and why does he do this? Perhaps explain in your biography! If you have any questions/concerns don't hesitate send me a PM! Once these changes are complete send me a PM, You have 24 hours before you are denied. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
David_Shadows 1 Author Share Posted October 5, 2016 (edited) This is my edited Application. I hope I am not to late. What’s your Minecraft account name?: David_Shadows How old are you?:13 What timezone are you in?:Central time Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):None How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A old friend Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes i have Characters name: David Shadows Characters sex: Male Characters race: Elf Characters age: 57 Biography: David was not born in any town and never belonged anywhere he was given birth in a forest, his mother dieing giving birth to him. His father abandoned his mother when he was born and he was found by a traveler. This traveler found him and took care of him but the man who found him sadly died when David was the age of twenty. He was left in the harsh world working on his own having very few friends. He eventually found a place of his own in a small town and was one of the guards that protected the small town. He eventually had gotten married at the age of 52 and even had children. Then one morning on patrol he heard a explosion and as he ran back to the town his house was up in flames as he a man dragging out his wife and two daughters he saw him kill them all. He later found out that that man who slaughtered his family was his own father. He left the town, or what was left of it and he went to hunt down the his father. He eventually found him a year later and he killed him with all the anger that he had kept inside of him all of the years of blood shed and anger. His father men found him and took him and tortured him until he could escape. He escaped after a he turned the age of fifty seven. He went to a priest to try to lock away all his anger that he had used against his father begging that he would never use it again. It came with a cost. Turning one eye pure white. He hides his eye with his hair to not be looked down by others. He now carry,s his guilt wherever he goes looking for what lies ahead. Personality traits: David doesn't know many people anymore and is usually confined from other people. Ambitions: David doesn't have many goals but he likes magic and usually practices with a bow and sword. Strengths/Talents: David is very good at building, crafting, using a bow, and using a sword. Weaknesses/inabilities: he has to work on magic and not being so shy in public. Appearance: David has black hair, gray eye color, his hair covers one eye that is pure white, He wears green most of the time. Skin: (I cant seem to be able to put my skin on this but i will put it as my Icon for my account you can see it there. I am so sorry) I just found the edit button i feel stupid.... Well i am a bit new at this... Edited October 5, 2016 by David_Shadows Edit 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
luv 3469 Share Posted October 7, 2016 Sorry applicant your application has been denied for the following reasons lack of lore Please add lore to your biography, all our lore can be found on the Wiki or by asking a Wiki Team Member. Please reapply in 24 hours. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
luv 3469 Share Posted October 7, 2016 This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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