[✗] [Pending]Ege's Application

[NamikazeEge 0]

What's your Minecraft account name?: egemavis.
How old are you?: 14.
What timezone are you in?: GMT +3.
Are you aware the server is PG-13?: Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What's the rule you agree with the most?: 3. Because I've been dealing with them before.
Are there and rule(s) that confuse you or don't make sense?: No.
How did you find out about Lord Of the Craft?: By my friend.
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications:
Have you logged into the server yet?: No.
What is roleplaying?: If you are going to ask me, it means to empathize RP. Personally, while doing RP, I can understand what the person feels about what character thinks. We want to portray a character in a movie. We do this by doing RP.
What is metagaming?: The use of out of character knowledge in character.
What is powergaming?: Godmodding. Controlling a character without permission.
Character's name?: Ege.
Character's sex?: Male.
Character's race?: Human.
Character's age?: 18.
Biography: He was born in Johannesburg in 7th Snowmaiden 1569. His parents died when he is 3 years old and his elder brother be lost. He stayed on the streets of Johannesburg. He grew up by stealing until 10 years. He always wanted to be a warrior. He learned to using swords at 10.                                                          
When he is 10 years old, he begins to work in a farm for 8 years. he meet a man who name is John. He was best friend with John but a day his friend is died for pneumonia. After John's dead, he begins to change. He become to a cold-blooded man. After he encounter his brother and he begins to live in his brother's house and he left his job at the farm.
Personality Traits: He likes to read books and fight. When someone hits him, he definitely takes his revenge. He loves his friends. He likes different kinds of swords. He hates archery. He doesnt like love.
Ambitions: He wants to be a warrior with his brother.
Strengths/Talents: He is good at fights, he is agile and he is cunning.
Weaknesses/Inabilites: He is very skinny, he bad at archery and he cant use axes.
Appearance: He has got a brown hair, he hasn't got any scars. He has got green eyes. Height: 1.75 Weight: 65.
Skin: http://minecraft.novaskin.me/skin/6728257125744640/LTM8mc13-Medieval-Full

[Parion 1130]

 

Hello applicant!

Your application is currently pending; this means you are going to need to make a few changes before you can be accepted. Though, don't fret since you've a chance to fix this.

 

• Your definitions for power-emoting, metagaming and roleplaying are either a little vague or incorrect. Have a look at our own definitions and see if you can expand and rectify your answers. Remember to do this in your own words and not to plagiarise.
• We need to see at least three, accurate mentions of lore in your application. This can be as simple as mentioning the names of towns or referring to major historical events. The wiki and New Player Guide can provide lots of information that can help you out with this.
• See if you can develop your ambitions/strengths/weaknesses a little further. It would be really nice for you to include more than one or two details for each section since we really want to learn about your persona. Perhaps include a couple of sentences for each section.

 

Besides this, your application is very good!

You have 24 hours to make the changes required. If this is not seen to within the given time, your app will have to be denied.

If you have any questions or need further assistance, feel free to PM myself via the forums.

[Parion 1130]

Hello applicant. Unfortunately, we have had to deny your application because the requested adjustments were not applied to your application in the given frame of time.

 

Do not fret! Re-application is permitted in 24 hours.

If you have any further questions PM myself via the forums.

[Parion 1130]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.