[✗] [Pending] Whitelist - by BrainDamager

[BrainDamager 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: BrainDamager

How old are you?: 14

What timezone are you in?: Texas

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That you shouldn't ruin someones RP through cyberbullying, cheating etc.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no all rules are there for a reason

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: on Youtube looking for some Role Play server that has a huge fan base with lots of people

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): this is my first one

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes am online right now, atm

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Exploring your character, making a story for your self, but add to someones else story. You stick to your character and help others role players.

What is metagaming?: When you get or give information you're not supposed to know about. like getting someones name with out asking someone "whats your name?"

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Not making your character do things he most likely cant do in real life, Example ____ cuts ____,_____, and_____ head off with one swing

You should say "____ aims/trys...to cut of ____,____, and ____ head off with 3 swings

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Eve

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Eve was born at Linandria. Where he spent 13 years growing up with his mother and father. When Eve was a born his parents wanted his name to be spelled backwards and forwards there for giving him the name Eve. Eve always had loved his mother for as long as he can remimber, Eve learn by his mother, she told him every thing he knows. As Eve was growing up around 13 years old his father killed his mother in front of him. His father said "This is what it means to be a man." Eve still knows all the blood, the broeses, etc on his mothers face. A year went by when Eves father brought another woman in to the house say "kid this is your new mother". Eve took his fathers sword and crawled up behind him and slit his throat in his sleep. Eve ran away from the house he used to live in.

 

4 years went by alone. Eve killed his own food which he had to give up to the local village about 12 miles away, Eve made shelter out of wood, clay and stone. Even even had a farm that he would also give half of the food up to the local village. Eve study how to become a assassin for 9 years. After all he was ready for the world after his fathers words this is what it means to be a man. Killing is what Eve thought, but Eve knew it was wrong to kill his mother. He train for hours, days, years. He was finally ready. at the age of 22 he headed out from the darkness in to the world.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Is great with a sword, Has a sweet tooth, seems not to feel pain, He is a storngman you keeps his word. He is a funny man with a great since of humar. A little si-c0

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He wants to become the worlds best killer/bounty hunter/assassin, lives up to be a man, Wants to learn Magic.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Eve is great with swords, Eve is great with a bow, Eve is great at pick pocketing. And Stealing (if i can)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) The topic of Eves mothers death,

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Brown Hair, White, Strong, always wheres a hood in, combat, Mostly wheres black clothing, with a open gash near the left eye. Eve is 6.4 feet tall (76in)

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Claimed.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

 

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reasons:

- Your character biography needs to have at least 3 pieces of server lore.

- Your character biography needs to be 2 paragraphs long.

- Your character is very cliche and unoriginal. Many people apply as assassins like yours and we encourage you to try to mix it up and push your comfort zones to have a more original and fun character.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You do not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt1

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.