[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Whitelist Application

[Saibre 0]

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Saibre

How old are you?: 20

What timezone are you in?: PST

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yep.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No trolling or meme usage. I dont like griefers and obnoxious trolls.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I saw a youtube video someone posted and have always wanted to try it out being a huge RP fan.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/128875-denied-whitelist-application/#comment-1236959

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yep.

 

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Taking control of a character and acting like that character while developing stories and playing through their life.

What is metagaming?: Using kn0wledge outside the game to influence actions inside it.

What is power-emoting?: Creating situations as if you completely control the outcome, or forcing a situation on someone without their consent./ Roleplaying extremely unrealistic things that your character is unable to do.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Garrick Tilstromm

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human/Heartlander

Character’s age: 36

Biography : Garrick was born to a blacksmith and a tavern wench in the year 1547 in the city of Felsen. As a young boy he was fascinated with the conflict between The Holy Orenian Empire and The Empire of Vanderguan. As the soldiers marched through the streets, he would wear baskets on his head and make sticks into swords, trying to imitate the soldiers. As a teenager, he was apprentice to his father at the smithy. It was never what he wanted to do, and at any chance snuck away to train his swordsmanship so that one day he could become a soldier like the ones he saw as a child. His father knew of his plans, and knew that he could not keep him from doing what he wanted. His mother however, forbid him from joining. One warm summer day, he packed a bag and followed a group of soldiers to a staging area, where he watched them train and prepare for a battle. He followed them for days hoping for them to find some form of the enemy that they could engage. Right as it seemed all hope was lost, they were ambushed by a small group of Dwarves. During that battle, he saw exactly what he hoped; glorious combat. What he saw completely convinced him that this was what he wanted to do. When his father died from the Taint, he saw it as an opportunity to join the Imperial Legion. The fighting he partook in was not as he had imagined it would be. It was exhausting, brutal and terrifying. Five years into his service, he was gravely wounded by an arrow that stuck in his chest. Laying on the battlefield and watching his comrades die around him, he had just wished to see his father again so he could heed his warning. After exhaustively fighting the Empire of Vangerguan for 7 years, time had come to leave the Isles of Vailor, The Taint and his old life behind.When he was marching to face his new world, his attention was drawn to the fact that he hadnt seen his mother since the day he joined the legion. He promised himself that he would find her in the new world, if she made it through the portal. Settling in the new world was easy under the supervision of the Legion, but now that his service is done, he seeks a quieter life, and his mother if she even made it out of Vailor. With no remaining family or friends other than the few that he met in the legion, it was a tall task to come to a new world with nothing and look for the only thing he might have left.

 

Personality Traits:: Dislikes children and talkative young humans just like the ones that followed him around when he was in the legion. Also has a quiet dislike of Dwarves having fought against them for years, but will not openly admit it.

Ambitions: Desperately wants to find his mother somewhere in the world, or closure as to what happened to her. And he wants to settle down and start a family, or use his prior military knowledge to help others, provided they can pay of course.

Strengths/Talents: Having served in the Legion he was a decent swordfighter, and because of what he learned from his father he was a proficient blacksmith.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Has trouble expressing feelings and feels that people who do are weak. Often tends to hold grudges towards people who wrong him, therefor never really making any friends longterm.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) 5'11", messy brown neck length hair, minor scars and blemishes from years of warfare.

Skin: http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/97222824919275996/E1BAAE3F462BBD1F2BCE61E82CC7C57CBDBF6E70/

[Parion 1130]

 

Hello applicant! Apologies for the delay - it appears as though my first responses did not actually work.

Concerning your application, it is currently pending; this means you are going to need to make a few changes before you can be accepted. Though, don't fret since you've a chance to fix this.

 

• Your definitions for power-emoting, metagaming and roleplaying are either a little vague or incorrect. Have a look at our own definitions and see if you can expand and correct your answers. Remember to do this in your own words and not to plagiarise.
• Try to expand your biography to meet the two paragraph requirement - this should not be difficult, considering what you've already got.
• Try expanding your traits/skills/weaknesses/etcetera. I typically advise producing one to two sentences for these responses since we really want to see you indicating some persona development.

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes required. If this is not seen to within the given time, your app will have to be denied.

If you have any questions or need further assistance, feel free to PM myself via the forums.

[Parion 1130]

 

Well done, applicant! With the changes made, your application can now be accepted.

 

On behalf of the Application Team, I warmly welcome you to the server and the Lord of the Craft community. Good luck and enjoy your time roleplaying in the Isles of Axios!

 

You'll be whitelisted very shortly. While you wait I would advise you have a good read of our wiki and forums. If you need any further help or have any questions, feel free to send me a PM via the forums or in-game.

[Parion 1130]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

[Parion 1130]

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.