[✗] Whitelist Application

[ProSlayer 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:  ProfanitySlayer

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am very aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What timezone are you in? Eastern Timezone

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You have to RP almost everything!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A close friend of mine convinced me to apply.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): None 

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

Roleplaying is when you act like a fictional, or real person. You can talk and act like them.

What is metagaming: Metagaming is to use information to help you in your character’s life. Ex: Like if your friend tells you something bad is taking place, that is metagaming.

What is powergaming?:The act of any character doing something the would not do in real life. Ex. If you say in a game that *slices John’s head off* you can not do that in real life, only in the game.

Character’s name: ProfanitySlayer

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human-Heartlander

Character’s age: 28

Biography: Born in Ariel, Aegis, ProfanitySlayer was raised by 2 very loving and forgiving parents, who were wealthy, too. He had 1 brother, Carter. His name was Slayer, but since he swore a lot, the name ProfanitySlayer stuck. People called him PS for short. Until twelve years later. His parents had scolded him for what was the first time, and he was furious. He wished in his head that they would die and just leave him alone. That night, he was asleep, when a loud noise woke him. It was a scream. He rushed to his parents room, only to see them dead, with bandits and thieves jumping out the windows to escape. He found out they were called "The Wakening'. They had one purpose, to use The 'Imperial Doctrine' , their plan to take over everything and make people their slave. He vowed to destroy them before they did, make them pay for what they did to his family. After that, he was raised by his close uncle, James. When he was 18, he set out to find something that would help him complete his promise. He went to many places, but never found one that suited him. So know he wonders, learning different skills from different people.

           Eventually, he became a knight at age 24, so that enabled him to do what he wanted, destroy The Wakening. He defeated the lower men of the group, but didn't find the leader for another 3 years. It was a long battle, ended a week before his birthday. The leader was known as The Compassionate One, so he let Slayer breath a little. On the third day, he made the leader, who he discovered his name was Blane, go into a full on rage mode, because he cut off the one thing that Blane loved: his nose. Slayer finally defeated Blane and he continued his life as a knight, peacefully it seemed. He decided that The Wakening was over and there would be no Imperial Doctrine. Or was it??

Personality Traits: Nice, Brave, Fearless     

Ambitions: A Hero.

Strengths/Talents: Fighting, Acrobatics, aim.  

Weaknesses/Inabilities: At the mention of his parents, he falls into despair (though sometimes he doesn't), he has asthma (making it so he has to finish a battle quickly before he needs a break.)

 Appearance: Redish-orange hair, light brown skin, red and brown clothing, and a scarf, a scar that goes right over his eyes.  

 

The Skin:

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-You dont seem to define meta-gaming, you seem to be missing the point of what such is.

 

-The example you give for power-gaming misses what power-gaming is.

 

-ProfanitySlayer is not a suitable character name.

 

-Aegis was abandoned over 200 years ago in-character, thus making it a unsuitable place for your character's origin. Somewhere such as Vailor, or the current land of Axios would be a suitable replacement for such.

 

-There does exist something in lordofthecraft called the imperial doctrone, though it is far from what you explain.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and bears many discrepancies and impossibilities. He was only scolded once in... 12 years?

 

-Having one's character's parents randomly murdered by bandits is unfathomably cliche and overused. IF you wish for your character's parents to needlessly die, please supply a better reason.

 

-Being able to singlehandedly destroy an entire competent criminal organization is a fair bit excessive, and extremely unlikely.

 

-Simply be despaired by mention of one's parents isnt a weakness. (ESPECIALLY if it many of the times just... doesnt.) Due to these parents not being anyone ingame, no-body would know these characters, or none-the-less mention them, since no-one but your character ingame knows of them.

 

-Your minecraft skin does not fit with your description, the skin has blackish brown hair, whilst your description paints him as having grey hair.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.