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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: DeadlyMesa

How old are you?:17

What timezone are you in?: Eastern Time Zone

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Behavior during Role play

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Nope

Link(s) to past White-list Applications (If applicable): None

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be white-listed without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role-playing is the act of playing as another person that is not himself/herself, For example. You are now playing as Bobby Joh.

What is metagaming?: Meta-gaming is telling player information to another non-playing character, For example Skype: Bob: War with the Elfs! Come online!

What is power-emoting (power-gaming)?: Power-emoting is the act of doing something that is not realistically possible in-game, For example: Bob: Cuts Jon's body in half with one blow

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Chardinu Princeton

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human, Far-folk

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 43

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; here have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Chardinu Princeton was born on the Suns Smile of the 12th 1529 in the Isle of Asul, Haria. Chardinu was a troubled boy and the child of Ashley and Loren Princeton. Chardinu caused a lot of trouble and plenty of "mistakes" after a few years Ashley was pregnant with another baby girl, Lavender Princeton came along this is when had problem arose and the family got mugged by a Dwarven gang, Chardinu was injured as a mugger stabbed him in back of his head. When this occurred the family knew it was not safe in Haria so they fled to The Holy Orenian Empire, Johannesburg. The ship crashed and Chardinu was believed to have went down with the boat, even though Chardinu did not go down with the boat he still stayed away from his family. Instead he fled to places like The Confederation of Sutica, and The Sultanate of Haria. There he continued with mining and doing merchandise with the items he found on his journeys. But with the stab on the back of his head caused his ear drum to break making him deaf on the left ear and caused some mental issues and resulting with consistent anger. This caused him even more trouble then he already made, making him get a bounty in certain places he went

 

  Chardinu then found his long lost sister back in Northern Oren, Karlsburg. He started meeting her and every now and then spying on her. He started noticing a man coming into her life starting a relationship that was stronger then Chardinu's, Chardinu became furious and tried to find ways to stop the relationship to become stronger. Later on she was purposed by him. Chardinu left Lavender and left to The Isle of Ceru. His father parents died while looking for him in Asul, War Ugz.He had an even higher bounty for getting his parents killed. Chardinu started running out of places without bounty for him. So he stayed in the wilderness, doing lumber and mining as his only income.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Quirks: Has a problem with his ear so does not understand very well when it comes to conversations so will often say things that are not related to a topic the conversation is about. Habits: Chardinu will ussually think everyone as a mugger and be very fearfull around them and hurt them with a weapon. Likes: Chardinu enjoys mining and working very hard to get bad things off of his mind, he enjoys bieng alone since he wont cause trouble when around others. Dislikes: He dislikes relationships and bieng weaponless since he is always fearful of his surroundings.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A Traveling Trader

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Mining, fighting, causing mischief

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Breeding, Fishing

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Chardinu is 6'1 and 167 LB, with white hair and bushy eyebrows, no scars, and a old trading outfit

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)emanuel_minecraft_skin-7336940.jpg

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Hello applicant!

Your application is currently pending; this means you are going to need to make a few changes before you can be accepted. Though, don't fret since you've a chance to fix this.

 

  • Your definitions for power-emotingmetagaming and roleplaying are a little vague. Have a look at our own definitions and see if you can rectify your answers. Remember to do this in your own words and not to plagiarise.
  • We need to see at least three, accurate mentions of lore in your application. This can be as simple as mentioning the names of towns or referring to major historical events. The wiki and New Player Guide can provide lots of information that can help you out with this. This is included since some details might be removed as a result of the additional suggestions I am going to provide.
  • Try not to include significant details concerning additional characters that would not, in fact, exist. This mainly is referring to the following:
     
    21 hours ago, Chardinu Princeton said:

    One day she was proposed by him and Chardinu officially gave up. (or did he Muhahaha!) His last plan to do was to splash Lavender with a potion that allowed her to have a really bad appearance whenever anger stroke, instead it backfired and only made her hair red whenever she got angry or stressed.


    This doesn't exactly fit in with our lore nor would it bear any lasting effects on persona storylines. Perhaps produce a slightly vaguer life for your persona and allow in-game scenarios to cause more purposeful scenarios, opportunities and experiences.
  • You need to provide more details in your likes/dislikes/ambitions/etcetera sections. I recommend one to two sentences for each.

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes required. If this is not seen to within the given time, your app will have to be denied.

If you have any questions or need further assistance, feel free to PM myself via the forums.

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Well done, applicant! With the changes made, your application can now be accepted.

 

On behalf of the Application Team, I warmly welcome you to the server and the Lord of the Craft community. Good luck and enjoy your time roleplaying in the Isles of Axios!

 

You'll be whitelisted very shortly. While you wait I would advise you have a good read of our wiki and forums. If you need any further help or have any questions, feel free to send me a PM via the forums or in-game.

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Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

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Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

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