[✗] [Pending] application

[Mit 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:ilovebacon345678

How old are you?:13

 

What timezone are you in?:7:51

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:To preserve and promote a friendly and cooperative environment for everyone, to ensure people feel safe and comfortable within the community

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: the youtuber named probablynotapanda

 

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:when you become some one your are not in a different reality from your own.

 

metagaming?: is when you know something but that your character doesn't.

 

 power-emoting (powergaming)?: act on someone without leaving him a possibility to defend himself                                                                              In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.high elf blue eyes and gold hair

 

Character’s name: (Elvin) 

 

Character’s sex: (male) 

 

Character’s race: (high elf)

 

Character’s age: (26)

 

Biography:I was a young boy I was 26 i lived with my dad. My mom died 6 years after i was born. She was murderd i hoped to find the man that killed my mother but i could not find him. after a month i moved out and went on a journey to find a place to call home. I also moved out is because i hoped to start a family of my own. I hope to find a place like Salvus i walked and walked till i found the place called Courland I lived there till i got marred to a girl. Her name is Jule. She was the one, i felt it. I loved her but Jule and I moved so we can find a good place to call home. We bought a horse and rode to Lorraine that was the place i called home i loved it there And i also found My moms killer there. My moms killer was a man called Jeff. That is where my adventure  began. 

 

Ambitions: (Mage) 

 

Strengths/Talents: (Farming)

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (fighting)

 

Appearance:(blue eyes gold hair pointy ears and long hair)

 

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

if this is ok if not i will try to get a better one

[Parion 1130]

 

Hello applicant!

Your application is currently pending; this means you are going to need to make a few changes before you can be accepted. Though, don't fret since you've a chance to fix this.

 

• Currently, your definitions for power-emoting, metagaming and roleplaying are a little vague. I am going to have to ask you to expand these answers, just so I know you have a thorough understanding concerning the terms. By clicking on the words above, you'll be redirected to their wiki pages. Alternatively, you can read about all three on our definitions page. Remember to rectify these responses in your own words and not to plagiarise.
• We need to see at least three, accurate mentions of lore in your application. Currently, you only have one clear detail:
   

  1 hour ago, Mit said:

  i was born in salvus

  
  Which wouldn't actually be applicable since Salvus has not existed since Vailor. Fortunately, expanding lore can be as simple as mentioning the names of towns or referring to major historical events. The wiki and New Player Guide can provide lots of general information that can help you out with this. Use the New Player Guide to help out with dates so you can apply the correct lore for your persona's age.
  
  For High Elves, we also have plenty of guides and pages that are very interesting to read and can help you out when expanding your lore - everything you might need to know is kept on the [OOC] High Elven Player's Guide linked below:
   
• You need to provide a few more details in your likes/dislikes/ambitions/etcetera sections. I recommend one to two sentences for each since we really want to see the initial development for your persona as a character.
• While it isn't mandatory, I'd suggest you rewrite your biography using the third person. Again, I repeat, this isn't a must but do be aware that the server uses third person as the predominant form of communicating in RP.
• Currently your skin is unavailable. Please rectify this problem so we may review your skin and its suitability for the server environment.

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes required. If this is not seen to within the given time, your app will have to be denied.

If you have any questions or need further assistance, feel free to PM myself via the forums. As a leading figure of the High Elven council, I can give you plenty of advice concerning the lore and social etiquette of the race.

[Parion 1130]

Hello applicant. Unfortunately, we have had to deny your application because the requested adjustments were not applied to your application in the given frame of time.

 

Do not fret! Re-application is permitted in 24 hours.

 

Your submission should be up to scratch for acceptance if you use the advice formerly given.

If you have any further questions PM myself via the forums.

[Parion 1130]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.