[✗] [Pending] [REVISED] Jarzgo008_YT's Whitelist Application

[Varvan Firestone 3]

• Out-Of-Character Information
  Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this
  is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
   
  What’s your Minecraft account name?: Jarzgo008_YT
  What timezone are you in?: Eastern Time Zone UTC-05:00
  How old are you?: 15
  Are you aware the online content on this server may not be
  appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied
  for being under 13): Yes
  Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
  What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Trolling
  Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so
  we can help clear it up!): No
  How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend DarkElfs
  Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): None accpeted, only one posted and deined
  Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted
  without logging in at least once): Yes, once
   
   
  Definitions
  Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make
  sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of
  another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic
  denial  of your application!
   
  What is roleplaying?: creating and playing as a character, mostly of
  a fantasy world
  What is metagaming?: an action or method in which the game transcends a prescirbed ruleset or out of game in rp
  What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: style of interacting with game systems, more in video games, to increase progress to a goal.

• 
  Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be
  called?) Jarzgo
   
  Character’s sex: (male or female?) male
   
  character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) cave dwarf
   
  Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or
  older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred
  years old!) 173 Years Of Age
   
  Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long.
  Remember to add three references to the server lore): Jarzgo is a small and sturdy and is a cave dwarf. He likes to smith weapons and armor and other types of things. Jarzgo, like most dwarves, strive for power and conquest. Jarzgo doesn't like to pray to just dwarven gods, which they call Brathmordakin though since all he knows in his life only thing he prays to other than god from the westernlands ‘Ownys’. Jarzgo travels a lot so he doesn't have a set home but he does like to camp in caves and in the mountains, giving him a reminder of home.
             Jarzgo doesn't mind when other races, or even other dwarves, make fun of his size for he is very short, even for a dwarf. All dwarves were cursed to be greedy, Jarzgo likes to hoard things, especially noodles... he really likes his noodles. Jarzgo travels somewhat around the country adventuring for best weapons and gear and or materials to use in his life. On one these travels he does he decide to head to place in the westernlands where he met a human named Ser Rolien, they kept in touch and sometimes would have parties talking of simpler times. Jarzgo mumbles alot and some people are ok with that but it does happen to get annoying. Jarzgo likes to tinker with metal, making gears and small machines, people think he is a madman and some say to him "In this day and age we use magic and weapons, simple stuff, we don't make... what do you call them... machines, we don't need them, they make people lazy and slow". Jarzgo doesn't listen to them and tinkers anyways.

  (where does your character come from?; where
  have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)
  Jarzgo comes from the caves of mountains of aegis, travels everywhere, doesn't remeber(lost his mind after a battle with an orc) 
  Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes
  and dislikes?) he likes noodles, dislikes orcs, has a habit of having
  anger issues, he also likes to tinker with metal to make gears and
  small machines, powered by magic.
   
  Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) a strong
  warrior that sense short then most can get under ya fast in a fight and sense grown up around forge most life he learn different skill from it and to keep in his life.
   
  Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)
  Tinkering, Also anything else be need of him if do with working with anything do with blacksmithing, repairs, and tinkering in life
   
   
  Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to
  work on?) not fast, cant jump high, somewhat lazy
   
  Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are
  they?; hair color?; scars?) 4ft3in, brown hair, wears black goggles
  with green lens, beard
   
  Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you
  need help, see our screenshot guide here.) 
   
  https://gyazo.com/90f1aaedb14aaa593a1e1e42fbd91098

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Under Review

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

- Placed on Pending because your metagaming and power-emoting definitions are incorrect.

- Your character is not old enough to have lived in Aegis, that realm is long abandoned.

- Your character is much too short for a dwarf, if you are looking to play a character around that height range I recommend you play a halfling.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for changing your definitions to be PLAGIARIZED, which is unacceptable.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.