[✗] [Pending]RedStone_Jock Whitelist Application

[redstonejock 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:RedStone_Jock

What timezone are you in?:EST

How old are you?:17

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:To not use gliches

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:a friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:Putting yourself in your carecter’s shoes and playing with others

What is metagaming?: is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game. Another definition refers to the game universe outside of the game itself.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:is when you dont give pepole a chance to retaliate 

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)brody collins

Character’s sex: (male or female?)male 

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) n

  

Brody’s life started when he was walking to a tavern in axios in st charles burge with his dad.  And a elf shot a arrow right in his chest. Brody lives with untamable anger. So he got mad and swore he would not stop until he found who killed his father, as he held him in his arms as his father died. He then found an elf named Paelias and told him the whole story about his dad. The elf said to relax and then he took him to the human empire.

   And he meet his best friend William and he found out the story of him and his dad and then that he has serious anger problems.and then William got scared and ran from Brody but he told him that the wise elf he had meet trying to find the murder of his dad, so william was not as scared as he was but he said he would help him find the murder and lock him up.

So William and Brody found the murderer and got him locked up but Brody one or two anger problems but William calmed him down so then the people of the city let Brody become a citizen of the empire. Brody is a brave and strong and he fights a least  something every day he has been drafted into the military's around axios but he did not accept the offer he thinks of himself as aloun person but there is one military where he wants to go .

   now he works out every day and he is most of the time  battling threats on the frontier every time he goes out to battle he gets one more highlight in his hair. And this is where brody is today

 

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)to workout get stronger practice fighting and read the creators word 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be? a mishenarey and share the name of the lord 

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)brave,persuasive

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)Anger and keeping himself calm 

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)hey has a scar right down his arm, he is 6,7,he has brown hair he is really strong 

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Pending.

 

-Your application is strewn with typos and errors,  and is almost un-understandable at some points.

 

-Your meta-gaming definition is poorly written, and difficult to understand. 

 

-Your power-gaming definition is incorrect, please take a look at the wiki post linked in the format to get a better understanding of what power-gaming is.

 

-Having one's character's parent murdered randomly and vowing revenge is unfathomably cliche, and overused.

 

-An biography should say where a character came from, yet yours seems to start whilst he is a adult? Nothing of that nature is explained, and its very confusing

 

-Your character's biography jumps around alot, and leaves a great deal to be answered. He was a minister, than he's... fighting something on the frontier? And than he got a scar somewhere? 

 

-You have 24 hours to  fix the listed problems in your application.

 

-Failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied, and having to wait an additional 12 hours.

 

-Please send me a PM once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions.

 

-Denied.

 

-You plagiarized on your meta-gaming definition, taking it directly from wikipedia.

 

-Plagiarizing again in any form will result in being banned from applying.

 

-Due to defying the no plagiarism rule, you must wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours from the below post.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.