[✗] [Pending] Cloudee_'s Whitelist Application

[Cloudee_ 0]

 

 

OOC:

My Minecraft account name is Cloudee_

I'm in GMT (+0:00)

I am 12 years old

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, And I'm okay with that.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Don't break Server Lore and No metagaming/powergaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope <3

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Through my friend, (Fahdi is his MC username and you should totally add him to the whitelist)

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): (I don't get this one)

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):  Yes, Now I have (12:37PM GMT (+0:00) )

~ DEFINITIONS ~

Roleplaying is where people takes roles of characters, fictional or not, and act out a story.

Metagaming is when the player knows things that their character doesn't know, but makes their character know them. For example: hearing through walls or above/below floors.

Powergaming is when your character is too OP. This could be with magic, knowledge or strength. This can also mean when the character does the action instead of attempting to do it, this gives an unfair advantage to the powergamer/power-emoter.

IC/Bio:

Lucile Uplore is a female Heartlander, at the age of 18. She is from Alexandria, where she currently resides. Lucile is an artist, she takes inspiration from almost everything, and is always holding a pad and pen. She enjoys nature and walking. She has an abstract mind but is very creative, but she never gets things finished because of her extremely short attention span. Her temper could also be improved, but she is kind and loving to her friends and family. She is a colour freak, and loves the rainbows in the sky, but her favourite weather is snow. Lucile has many ambitions, like art and fashion, but because of her short attention span, she doesn't get much accomplished. She is very good at running, drawing and making clothes. Physical strength is not her forte.Her attention span, and her temper are big flaws in her personality. But she could also eat a little more, as all she does is run around and do random things, she doesn't eat  much. Lucile has naturally dark-ish, mousy-brown hair, her eyes are a listless and deep blue. She has blush cheeks and has a slim build. She's relatively pale, and tall. She is about 5"5. She usually braids flowers into her hair, and wears a long, blue dress.

 

Lucile has a pet puxie, his name is Bobby. Bobby likes to sit around and be pet. He has brown eyes and a dark brown/ginger-ish coat, his medium-length tail curls over his back. Surprisingly, he's very big for a puxie. Lucile and Bobby live in a small-ish townhouse in Alexandria. Lucile draws her puxie doing lots of things like tricks and while he's asleep. They like to go on longs walks near the outskirts of the jungle. Lucile adores just sitting down, taking out her pad and pencil, and sketching flowers, like the Phoenix' Teardrop and Fire Flowers (which she sits quite far away from, because she doesn't know how long it'd take for them to mature). Lucile and nature merge perfectly, as sometimes she takes her anger out on the dirt, kicking it back into the holes that Bobby likes to dig, very rarely. She has a very outgoing outlook on life.

Skin:  (see picture)

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.
 

• You must log into the server at least once in order to be white-listed.
   
• Your biography is much too short and contains only one accurate reference to server lore. We expect at least two lengthy paragraphs and three pieces of server lore in this section. Here's are a couple links that may help you in expanding on your biography.
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Heartlanders
   
• Your definitions are missing completely. These are an essential part to the application process. I ask that you look at the white-list format once again, and be sure to add in that portion. You may use the roleplaying, metagaming, and power-emoting definitions from our wiki, but be sure to write them in your own words.
   https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
  
  Edit: Giving this applicant an extension until 4/23/17 at 4pm EST because they have been working on their changes.

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 12 hours, if you apply sooner than 12 hours you will face denial. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.
 

• While some portions of your application were improved, the entire bottom part was completely merged together to form into a biography of sorts. This is not the proper application format. You would have to separate them, and them expand on the existing biography.
   
• Your biography still required one more piece of server lore.

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.