[✗] Application

[Hannah R 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:xXNightBlueXx

What timezone are you in?:EST

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:"The abuse of glitches or any exploits are not tolerated."

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):Nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:After 30 minutes of looking for roleplay servers, I found this one. It seems to be on my level.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): I don't have any.

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes I have.

 

What is roleplaying?:Act and/or perform another character.

What is metagaming?:general information your character does not know or has yet to find out

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: character is successful without giving the other player character the freedom to act

 

 

 

Character’s name: Hannah Melanie Ruby

Character’s sex: Female.

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography: Born in Kingdom of Courland, her parents were very, very snobby. Apparently, it was all an act to keep their house on their property. Edventually, Hannah became a rebel. Absorbing her parent's actions she too, had become snobby. Rebellious, she would grief many houses, skip classes, and much more. Soon enough when Hannah was 10, she realized what she was doing to other people. Destroying their property and making their life a living nightmare. In order to keep her emotions from taking over her she learned to make potions, and draw.

 

Edventually, when she turned 18, she abandoned home and ran to find a different place, something more calming. However, 2 years had past and somebody had found her, and shot her with a tipped arrow. Escaping quickly she found herself in Haense and was treated for the wound. After getting treated, she fled into the forest heading to Haria. Not too long, she had recieved a message letting her know that her parents had been killed by drowning. After returning back to her home town, she started to work for a farm. Hannah hated it so much, when she gathered enough money for a house, she quit and purchased one. Hannah soon learned that she also hated close combat.

 

 

Personality Traits: Paces back and fourth when nervous and/or thinking. Hot headed at times, Scar located on hip, but is hidden by clothing. Hates surprises.

Ambitions: To become a good teacher for others who want to learn (Archery specifically)

Strengths/Talents: Art, Clothing Maker, Archer, Potions

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Water, Close Combat, Farming

Appearance: http://imgur.com/1hICro4 (I couldn't screenshot in minecraft. Also, I am not changing my skin because the others that you recommended on plantminecraft are hideous in my opinion, especially since I don't want my character/player to be wearing dresses. The skin I made seems to fit the setting perfectly.)

 

[LordCommander 163]

[LordCommander 163]

Hello Friend!, sadly your app was not up to the quality required to be accepted, however, if you fix a few things, this pending will be changed to Accepted.

 

1) Your Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming are sadly incorrect. However you can find the correct definition on the Wiki, Please use your own words for plagiarizing will get your app instantly denied.  

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

 

2) Sadly your backstory does not meet the two-paragraph minimum requirement. I recommend going into more detail into why they rebelled, why were their parents snobby and rich? were they Nobility? Merchants? Also, you need 2 more references to the lore so I recommend looking in the Wiki for more details on Courland. 

 

3) Your strengths and weaknesses need clarification, why is one of their weaknesses water? perhaps explain why you have those strengths and weaknesses, like maybe they almost drowned and it gave them a fear of water or perhaps their love of archery and art were their way of expressing themselves in a restrictive life that they so desperately needed.

 

4) The last thing that needs to be fixed is your skin, it is not appropriate to the setting. I recommend looking on Planet Minecraft for a Proper Medieval Fantasy Skin, and writing a proper description to match the skin, like 2+ Sentences to describe them.

 

Once you have done all the things, you will very likely be accepted!. Don't give up hope though, I believe in you!.

 

[LordCommander 163]

 

Sadly, your application was denied. You were missing one more lore reference, and your skin is sadly still not lore-friendly. There is a lot of really bad dress skins I know, but try your best to look for a skin that is more fitting of your character, I'm sure under the hundreds of thousands of frilly girl dresses, there is some cool roguish attire waiting to be worn. I do hope you try again later.

 

You may apply again in 12 hours

 

[LordCommander 163]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.