[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Lotc Application, WillFrostStorm

[HornedGod 9]

 

 

 

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:WillFrostStorm

What timezone are you in?:Brussels/europe

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes i am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes i have!

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:When gathering recourses that you remove flying leaves and so cuz this is so irritating to look at and it doesn't have a real feeling.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):Nope all clear!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:I heard people talking about it on another RP server

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):/

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):I haven't but il check that out first.

 

 

Definitions

 

What is Roleplaying?:To be someone that has his own character and background and stay in this role., talking with other players like you would live in this virtual world.

What is Metagaming?:When you're playing a game that you're using content not included with the game to gain an advantage over other players.

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?:Powergaming is forcing actions on other players or not giving them a chance to act.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Will FrostStorm son of William son of Liam.

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:A Highlander

Character’s age:27

Biography  (This is one of the most important sections of the application. Please take your time and make it a decent paragraph long. Read up on your character's race and be sure to add at least one accurate reference from the server lore):Will was born in 1593 on an asland far north, too small to see it on any map. The island is surrounded by other islands what they call: The northern far lands of Faragar. His father was William FrostStorm, They even say he's far family of Grand King Algoda Frostbeard This king was a dwarf. Williams grandfather was a far nephew from the grand king they where just Family by marriage but had less or the same last name with one word as variant. So basically once there was a dwarf in the family that married a human women and so the family lost his dwarves looks and behavior.

He lived a good life there till he moved more south because of a bad harvest in 1607 then he was 14. They moved to the grand kingdom of Urugan. When he was 17 his mother Jovana died while giving birth to he's little brother John. His brother and father died by a mutual battle between his father and a few barons because they wanted to buy his land. Since then he hated rich people and became a rogue learned how to fight.

Personality Traits:He doesn't like rich fancy guys or ladies with no respect for others.

Ambitions:To become an honors and fair man serving his own Wanting and less, this means he's not trying to become Robin hood or something.

Strengths/Talents:Sword fighting and sneaking in the night also building is his thing.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:To be sometimes more aggressive he always stays calm sometimes to calm...

Appearance:He has brown hear also a brown beard. His hear is short on the sides of his head and on the right side he has a tattoo witch means "fait remembers the north" His clothing can be different from time to time.

Skin: http://imgur.com/v0qRuMs

[LordCommander 163]

[LordCommander 163]

Well, my friend, your application has not been deemed acceptable by the standards of Lord of the Craft. There a few things you need to fix in order to get your application accepted. Once you have done them, send me a private msg and I shall review it again.

 

1) Definitions: Your definition of metagaming is incorrect, I recommend looking on the LoTC Wiki for their definition. After reading it, word it in your own way to avoid plagiarism. 

 

2) Backstory: According to your race, you are a human, however, it says that you are related to a Dwarven King? how does that work? it seems rather strange in my opinion even if you are distant relatives. 

 

3) Ambitions: This is a rather small nick-pick, however, your ambitions are to be a lawless man? that really isn't a goal. I recommend thinking of something more ambitious such as the leader of a bandit gang or master outlaw. 

 

You have 24 Hours to edit your application.

[LordCommander 163]

Congratulations my friend! your application has been deemed acceptable by the standards of Lord of the Craft. I hope you enjoy your travels through the world of Axios, and if you need any help, come join the New Player Discord! https://discord.gg/C2ETUy9

[LordCommander 163]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

[LordCommander 163]

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.