[✗] [Pending] MoofMoof8's application

[moofmoof8 4]

Username: moofmoof8
Time zone: U.S. Eastern Standard Time
Age: 18
 
Are you aware the content and interactions may not be appropriate for children under 13? Yes I am aware of this.
Have you read and agreed to the rules? Yes I have read and agreed to the rules.
Which rule do you agree with most? I agree with staying in character at all times is the most important rule.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No there are not.
How did you find this server? I found it by watching GizzyGazza's video.
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A
Have you logged on before? I have logged on once before writing this application.
 
Character's name: Ruis
Character's sex: Male
Character's race:High Elf
Character's age: 20
 
What is Role-playing: Role-playing is where you act as a persona/character you have created and made a story behind.
What is Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is by messaging others to gain help out of character and can get you punished.
What is Power-Emoting: Forcing another player to do things they do not want to, because of the wording of your emotes.
 
Biography:
 
Job: none (wishes to become a mage) 
 
(Born and raised in asul and once served the lord of a great kingdom. Ruis was the war adviser for this great and powerful lord. Everything was peaceful and the kingdom was growing, until the lord was assassinated without a single trace of evidence to show for it. As Ruis tried to figure out who had committed such treasonous act against the kingdom, the people began to point fingers. A rumor began to spread through out the kingdom that Ruis grew power hungry and murdered the lord in hope to gain the thrown for his own. Not Long after people started to believe such a rumor regardless of everything Ruis had done for the kingdom. Ruis was stripped of his title and banished from the kingdom never to return to it. So Ruis did roam through the lands and helped others as best he could.)
 
Personality traits: is humble ;get along with others; is an excellent mage; helps everyone in need.
 
Ambitions: Tries to help others while searching for the one who killed the king and hopes to one day be welcomed back into his kingdom.
 
Strengths/Talents:magic, war planning, helping others.
 
Weaknesses: Archery, disrespect.
 
Appearance: 7'11" tall, black hair,  light blue eyes, wears gold trim cape with logo, moderately muscular, ,wears goggles, large cargo pockets, black pants with 3 stripes and weighs 190 pounds.

[AfricanGlasses 111]

Under Review

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.
 

 

changes:

1. Your powergaming definition is ALMOST there! Just make sure you elaborate that sometimes people HAVE to do roleplay they don't want to do (i.e getting robbed, losing an event, property, whatever the case may be).

2. Your biography is extremely vague. Try to utilize the Wiki to discuss the "kingdom" you are from.

3. Your weaknesses should be more attuned to personal attributes and weaknesses. 

[AfricanGlasses 111]

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[AfricanGlasses 111]

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