[✗] [Pending] trex14703's Application

[trex14703 0]

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Ablitorator429

What timezone are you in?:GMT

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Friend told me about  server

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: To act as someone who is not yourself/ out of character.

What is metagaming?: Acquiring knowledge outside the game and then saying that your in-game character also knows your knowledge.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: forcing a action among another player e.g. ‘Bill stabbed Jill in the heart’

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Bilbo Shovelfoot

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Halfling

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 29

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Bilbo Bagin’s is a Halfling, as you might be able to tell, from the realm of Axios in a village called Reedsbourgh, this is where Bilbo grew up with his family and friends. Bilbo was quite a strange Halfling compared to his friends because he had black hair, violet eyes, and 2’4 ft. Bilbo was always protective of his loved ones and so was used to taking the hate from people. Bilbo never liked to go to the farms because he thought it to be boring. He also was always looking for any adventure he could get his tiny hands onto but his parents disapproved. They always told him “you will grow up to be a big, strong farmer like your father, and make our family proud” but sadly this never happened and after he told his parents he always thought they saw him differently… as if he was no longer their son… so Bilbo moved on and left the house at the early age of 26 and gone on to create his own life somewhere else in the realm.

 

Since Bilbo did not know where to go he had decided to build his own house in the woods but as he was gathering materials he stumbled across a High Elf how was coming through the area, he was leg-crossed in his camp and Bilbo’s natural reaction was “ ’E TOOK MY STUFF!” and went to attack the Elf, drawing out his puny sword Bilbo saw that the High Elf was pulling out a sword as big as him but Bilbo being the head-strong teen he is, he runs straight at the Elf and since he was untrained in the way of the sword Bilbo got hit straight on his head by the handle of the Elf’s sword and got knocked out. Later on Bilbo awakes, unpleasantly, to water being thrown onto his head from the stream nearby and as Bilbo is shocked back to life he sees that the High Elf is the culprit and screams “W’Y ARE YOU POURING WATER ON MY ‘EAD?!” and the Elf calmly reply’s with “Because you were knocked out and it is the fastest way to wake knocked out people.” Bilbo is slowly filling with rage but suppresses it for a few seconds and says “w’y w’ere you in my camp?” “Because it was warm and I was cold and also looking for something” the Elf replied. Bilbo assuming that the High Elf had taken his stuff he says “dude, can you at least give me my stuff back?” “What stuff, I didn’t take anyone’s stuff” the elf begrudgingly spoke “I only came here to get warm and go but then I am greeted by an angry Halfling who is accusing me of taking his stuff”. The Elf seemed reasonable, even though Bilbo still felt sore after that bludgeoning, and so decided to reason with the Elf “fine but for knocking me out can I ‘ave one favour?” Bilbo spoke. The Elf reply’s saying “Like?” Bilbo says “Like teac’ing me how to fig’t”. The Elf thinks and thinks but comes to the conclusion that “sure, why not, but not for long, ok?” Bilbo ecstatically says “YAY, first, w’at is your name?” The High Elf says “Av’maehr, but don’t try to pronounce it because you will fail miserably”. The days turn into week, and weeks turn into months as Bilbo trained with Av’maehr, learning on how to fight with a sword, at one point Bilbo thought he was invincible, but quickly he realised that he was not even close to being invincible after he got hurt battling his first true foe, a zombie, and after the training was over, Bilbo was 28 going on to 29, he had finished building his house out of stone and wood from the forest. This is where Bilbo story ends, for now, but it is just the beginning of his adventures.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Kind but not very forgiving, overly protective and makes sure no-one gets to or near his personal space

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Defending and mining

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Arrogance and very overprotective.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Black hair, Violet eyes, 2.4ft

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) https://gyazo.com/049b0e503b2ebfe5c97b218d6080bba3

[Farryn 860]

 

Hello there! Your application is currently on pending due to a few errors that need fixing.

The errors you need to fix are listed down below and you have 24 hours to fix said errors.

 

 Definitions

 You need to define roleplay, metagaming, and powergaming more, as well as include roleplay scenarios of metagaming and powergaming so we're aware you understand what is and isn't metagaming and powergaming during roleplay.

 

Biography

This isn't an error that needs fixing but just to make you aware - the server has now transitioned to a new map called Atlas, therefore Axios is no longer our current map. Your character can still originate from Axios and be in Atlas, I am  just making you aware as you did not mention your character joining the transition to Atlas within the biography

 

Personality

You need to explain your character's personality more instead of two simple sentences. Try at least a paragraph of explaining both good and bad traits of your character - what good traits does their personality have? What bad traits do they have?

 

Ambitions

You did not write down what your character's ambitions are. What does your character strive for in life? Adventure? To learn more about himself? Get even with someone who did ill to him?

 

Strengths and weaknesses

Your strengths and weaknesses need a bit more explanation. I suggest that you follow this format with strengths and weaknesses: Have at least three strengths and three weaknesses that are made up of one physical strength/weakness, one emotional strength/weakness, and one mental strength/weakness. That way, you can balance out your character and not only be physical strength / weakness focused.

 

If you are stuck on a few areas, you are free to send a message to me by the forums and I can offer some tips and guidance. If you've finished making the required edits, just sent me a private message by the forums and I will re-check your application.

Remember - you have 24 hours to make these changes.

 

I hope you have a wonderful Christmas!

 

[Farryn 860]

 

I am sorry but you did not make the requested changes on your application, therefore this application has been denied.

Yet don't fear, you can reapply in 6 hours. Posting an application before the six hours have passed will result in that application getting denied. Furthermore, please use the feedback I posted on this application to improve on your next application.

 

Good luck and have a wonderful Christmas.

[Farryn 860]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.