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[TheWalrus 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: TheWalrus198

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -5:00 Toronto Ontario eastern standard time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im a gamer and im really good at minecraft.also i am good at rping.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:4 days 3-4 hours a day

-How long have you played minecraft?:1 year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: ive been rping in lots of othe games and i have been doing it for about 2 years

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it will be a real massive rp server and the best one there is out there!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on kreatious,minecrack.I played on them and felt like i wanted to some medieval rping.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes and think the lore should really be a book in the game.

-Name the 4 races on this server. elf,human,orc,dwarf

-How did you hear about us?: my brother told me about this server

-Did you vote?:yes

-What was your favourite Law?: no greifing

-What was your least favourite Law?: none realy

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? TheWalrus

In-Character: Daniel

-Character Name: Daniel Tsyganok

-What is your Race?: human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: TheWalrus198

-Biography: I Was born in a noble human family.Then one day me and my friend had a walk in the city.We came across a sewer.My friend Anthony told me we should go check it out.I went with him into the dark scarey sewer.We saw light in the corner so we went to it.We found a hole with a sign.It said beware and dont look behind you!Anthony said lets look behind!I turned then the whole sewer turned to a old mansion.Anthony was strangely gone.I was realy scared at that point.I was not that brave so i just sat still and closed my eyes.Then i fell asleep.I woke up and opened my eyes then i found myself all like a undead being.I then woke up.in the mansion again and this time it was all real.I now was really scared to open my eyes but still i did.I saw a shady figure it said you took a noble path and vanished. I looked at my self and i was oddly all shady like the shady figure.I was confused and found out that i was always in my own house and the shady figure was anthony who was in the mansion all that time.I now found my self in the cloud temple of aegis.I never thought i would ever be in here.I seen many different races like the orcs,humans,elfs and dwarfs. It was an amazing place.I started to feel an evil presence in me and became evil.Then i traveled the lands and finaly found the nation of Drauchreich.I finaly found what i was looking for and became the undead and found Striqaephoth later on and settled there,built a home and now live there.Finaly i woke up in my room and wished that was real and actualy tried to follow my dream.

-Character Age: 25

-Character Appearance: A bandit with gloves and a hood.

-Character Personality: I am evil and always come with what i was looking for.I can also blend in to dark places.I am good at finding things such as valuables.

-Your ambitions: wealth to buy all the things i want like armour and swords.

Power to rule everyone and take over aegis.Most importantly i am trying to hide from anyone who can kill me.

-Can your character read or write?: yes both but does not wish to do and only does if really needed.

-Can your character mine?: yes because i have been taught by my Dad when was little

-Are you a capable builder? yes my grandma taught me and i helped here build her castle

-Can you wield a sword?: yes i am great at holding a sword when i need to and i am great at blocking too.

-Enjoy Farming?: not realy because i need things right away and do not wish to wait for anything.

-Does your character have any special skills?:] not yet

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/155/20110922165723.png/

-Other Information: but really hope to join this server

[TheRedNinja 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[TheWalrus 1]

what did i do wrong just tell me the actual thing

[AllenTheGreat 286]

what did i do wrong just tell me the actual thing

You can't become an Undead from an Application, you have to choose one of the four races. Orcs, Humans, Dwarves, and Elves, and make a Biography appropriate for that race.

Also, It'd probably help to make a first and last name for your character, instead of

"Mr. Walrus." You should expand on your Character's Personal items, such as: Personality, Appearance, Ambitions. Special Abilities. You'd probably need to change your skin to something more appropriate for the Timeline. This is a Medieval Time, and i do not believe there's any Tuxedo like Clothes like the ones on your skin.