Nardah's final application

[Nardah 0]

i am posting my application gain because it was a very far back page and my first application which i later touched up was denied so i am sending my final application and leaving untill i get accepted because it too like 4 days for the first to get replied to and by then i had edited my application and my first one was denied because they didnt see i had fixed what i was working on.

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Nardah

-How old are you?:13 (but im reletively mature compaired to my age)

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:CST Canada/Manitoba

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes my grammar is rather good.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am a rather nerdy kid that everyone picks on in school and i only feel happy when i play video games. (true story (though it sounds worse than it is))

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:weekdays about an hour weekends around 3 hours to 7 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?: since alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying?: i have played runescape, world of warcraft, warcraft, and multitudes of roleplaying servers on minecraft

-What do you expect this server will be like?: an experience like no other

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Undead, and Ascended (6)

-How did you hear about us?: i noticed that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah

In-Character:

-Character Name: Lornan (no last name)

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: Lornan was an Archer on a trade ship that he was helping to cross and ocean because of his superior Marksmanship he was able to pick off pirates from far away when they tried to attack the ships, but with one of the encounters the pirates were more prepared and were able to force the ship back a few days, making them run out of food sooner than normal because they had to nurse their wounded, when they continued on their journey a pirate ship had another archer and was able to wound Lornan and he quickly lost consciousness from loss of blood. While Lornan was unconscious the crew took him to be dead so they pushed him overboard and kept his bow and quiver to sell at their next stop. when Lornan finally woke up he was on the shore of a deserted island (or so he thought) and when he looked around he noticed his favorite bow and quiver was gone. so without food or tools he went searching for civilization to hope he would be able to find out what happened to the ship and if he would be able to find his bow which he got from his father, which was a proud archer of his clan, when he was shot in his leg to be immobilized and then cut limb from limb by a barbarian.

-Character Age: 102

-Character Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is down to around his shoulders, Green eyes

-Character Personality: dark, not that talkative around people he does not know or does not like, but he will still get into arguments for what he thinks is right.

-Your ambitions: to become one of the greatest marksmen.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, but not that well

-Can your character mine?: yes but he isn't that skilled in mining

-Are you a capable builder?: Builder, no Architect, yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes but only up to iron swords

-Enjoy Farming?: not that much

-Does your character have any special skills?: he is rather good at jumping from tree to tree (aka Parkour)

-A screenshot of your skin: i used the attachment thing and it said it was too big

-Other Information: during the lack of food on the boat trip he has learned to conserve food.

[Respiren 524]

Denied

[Nardah 0]

Denied

why and how can i fix it?