Brophy's Application

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Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Jonseey

-How old are you?:18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +10 GMT/ Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Very well, I have lived in Australia for 18 Years and have learnt English my whole life.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Hi my name is brophy, I have been playing mine craft for almost a year now, and I have found this server over you tube. As soon as I saw this server i was amazed by all the wonderful creations and thought to myself maybe I could try to join this server and join these beautiful creations, mine craft is an awesome game and I love the challenges. thanks

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:20 hours Minimum.

-How long have you played minecraft?:Almost 1 year from now. I am pretty sure

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I am very well aware of What role-playing is, it is too change your current role to the role you have chosen etc i have chosen the dwarves role so therefore I have to act and talk like a dwarf.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Fun and Challenging

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:None so far

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:I have understood the lore, and Read and will follow the rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human Orc Dwarf Elf

-How did you hear about us?:Youtube, Minecraft forums.

-Did you vote?:Yes All 3 Websites.

-What was your favourite Law?:No Grieving.

-What was your least favourite Law?:No use of the 1337 Speak

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Brophy

In-Character:

-Character Name: Jonseey

-What is your Race?:Dwarf!

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Brophy

-Biography:Hello my name is Jonseey and this is my story. When I was younger, my father grew up building and mining around his town. he grew up to become a great wise builder, he got lots of women and chose my mother as his wife. Then I was born,sir jonseey of town kul'ruaj and my father was notorious around the village for being an outstanding miner or builder. Whenever there was a job he would be the one to stand there and help.. Then the town split up into hate groups and hated on my father, he didn't know what to do people didn't want him around the village they made a cult and killed my father, too this day I am still trying to find the killer of my father and avenge my fathers death and learn the same things as my father did and become a great builder/miner as he did. Years have passed and I still haven't forgotten what my father was like he taught me everything I have known and too this day I still build and mine like he did the day will come to resurrect my fathers death, but time will have to wait. ever since my father died, I still lived in his house of beauty and trained all night all day to learn his ways, my one and only dream is to find the killers and to become announced as a great dwarven builder like my father.

-Character Age:28

-Character Appearance:Young dwarf, brown beard red tipped armour.

-Character Personality:Funny outgoing dwarf.

-Your ambitions:Too become a great Dwarven Builder.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes very well

-Can your character mine?:I am a great Miner, and am looking forward to joining.

-Are you a capable builder?Yes very well

-Can you wield a sword?: Exceptionally good!

-Enjoy Farming?:Not a fan , but I will if I have too.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Can be able to build tall buildings, and great structures.]

-A screenshot of your skin: *See Attachments*

-Other Information:

[Shoi 173]

Character Name: Jonseey/Brophy im not sure what this means because i have already named my name

Please clearify this as just your character name. It is your character name, not any others.

Please reread your application and check for grammar errors. For example, make sure you only have 1 comma per sentence unless you have a list. Also capitalize the first letter of a sentence, and I's.

Also your biography is sort of short, try to aim for 3 or 4 paragraphs with 6 to 7 sentences per paragraph.

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Bump - Re-edited.

[Shoi 173]

Still some capitalization issues. Sorry. I will check back in a few on it.

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Honestly, i can read english, and it looks fine to me, other then some fine mistakes.. Ive seen people use u yu yeh yuh lol rofl lmao in there apps and even they get accepted.. There not even words ffs. Im not having a go at you i am just saying i dont understand what you mean. Ive learnt english my whole life ffs

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Bump-re edit

[Blaedr 42]

Application denied. Thread locked.

No bumping of apps. Poor grammar/spelling. Biography goes against the lore. Made up lore/towns/villages/important people. Answers poorly written/not filled out.

Do not continue attacking members of this server. Your anger and cussing is not welcome here.

Refill out the app and act appropriately, please.