[Denied]Nardah's hopefully fixed application

[Nardah 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

-How old are you?: 13 but turn 14 in November.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: CST Canada/Manitoba

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: in my opinion i would say i do.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: im a 13 year old that is in grade 9, i am not the most popular kid but no one really hates me except for the few guys that pick on everyone, i take judo on Fridays and guitar practice on Wednesdays and on mondays i have to help my mom cook supper.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: on weekdays about three hours while on weekends around 5 hours to 7 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: i have played minecraft since around the end of alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying?: role-playing is a form of game where people act like they are a certain role in a society in a video game, it is kind of like real life where you have to overcome obstacle to obtain what you want. minecraft role-playing is unlike regular minecraft because it usually includes you having to fight for materials and it incorporates fighting into the game more intricately.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a quite organized role-playing server with a vast amounts of lore and back-stories.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day by people who just log on and start breaking blocks.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elf, Dwarf, Human, Orc, (ascended, Undead (6))

-How did you hear about us?: i saw that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah

In-Character:

-Character Name: Lornan (no last name)

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: Lornan was an Archer on a trade ship that he was helping to cross and ocean because of his superior Marksmanship he was able to pick off pirates from far away when they tried to attack the ships, but with one of the encounters the pirates were more prepared and were able to force the ship back a few days, making them run out of food sooner than normal because they had to nurse their wounded, when they continued on their journey a pirate ship had another archer and was able to wound Lornan and he quickly lost consciousness from loss of blood. While Lornan was unconscious the crew took him to be dead so they pushed him overboard and kept his bow to sell at their next stop. when Lornan finally woke up he was on the shore of a deserted island (or so he thought) and when he looked around he noticed his favorite bow was gone. so without food or tools he went searching for civilization to hope he would be able to find out what happened to the ship and if he would be able to find his bow which he got from his father just before he died.

-Character Age: 87

-Character Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is down to around his shoulders, Green eyes, leather and metal bracers around his wrists, constantly wearing his father's quiver on his back.

-Character Personality: dark, not that talkative around people he does not know or does not like, but he will still get into arguments for what he thinks is right. always ready to help a friend in need.

-Your ambitions: to build up a new life and hopefully find his father's bow even if he has to travel to the nether and back.

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: no

-Are you a capable builder?: yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: not really

-Does your character have any special skills?: during the lack of food on the boat trip he has learned to conserve food.

-A screenshot of your skin: My Skin (click for link)

-Other Information: he is rather good at precision jumping (aka jumping courses)

[Nardah 0]

oh wow herpy derp fast reply i was editing it

i had to mix to things together so i temperarely posted it so i could copy something from another place on this forum (the format)

and how can i make my bio longer i kinda ran out of ideas

[Nardah 0]

hey... i just checked and my bio is almost the exact length of the good example