TheShadebois application (3rd)

[TheShadeboi 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:TheShadeboi

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes but ill make mistakes from time to time and Im not that great with punctuation and im not perfect with spelling

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: well im a good rper and im just looking for something fun to do

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: well probably 12 hours maybe more

-How long have you played minecraft?: ive played for about a year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know that roleplay is acting out a character and i know that anyone who powergames or metagames is never fun to play with and ive been doing it for a while i really love to rp cause its a great way for me to escape from my real life like in d&d also with some friends online

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it will be fun and interesting with all the interactions with so many different people

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: ive played on a pvp server before but the lack of rules made me leave just couldn’t servive for long

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I agree and understand the rules but I havent had time to read all the lore but im making progress on it

-Name the 4 races on this server. There are the dwarves, Humans, orcs, and elves, but also the subraces ascended, and undead

-How did you hear about us?: I saw a trailer for you on you tube favorited by the yogscast who are some of my favorite minecrafters

-Did you vote?: yes I did vote

-What was your favourite Law?:probably no destroying the landscape cause I love the natural look of minecraft

-What was your least favourite Law?: I really didn’t have a least favorite law I thought they were all reasonable

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? TheShadeboi

In-Character:

-Character Name: Shade

-What is your Race?: elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: TheShadeboi

-Biography: at a young age i was abandoned by my parents and had to grow up on my own and learned to look out for myself and no one else i lead a lonely life and sometimes I have to resort to stealing but i will never resort to murder. for a while i lived in the forest but the more i stayed the more i wanted to explore outward into the world i carved myself a crude bow and sent out to travel leaving the forest to my back and the memories of my lonely life behind.

-Character Age:approximately 18 but didn’t think remembering my birthday was that important

-Character Appearance: I dress in black covering my face with a black cloth over my mouth covering my nose I also have blond hair and blue eyes

-Character Personality: im a loner but I can take care of myself I rarely trust anyone other than myself and im very stuborn

-Your ambitions: my ambitions are to survive by any means necessary

-Can your character read or write?: I can read and write because I have sometimes stolen books and taught myself how thinking it a useful skill

-Can your character mine?: I prefer to stay in the trees than to go in a mine

-Are you a capable builder? I can build small shelters but usually I use natural shelters

-Can you wield a sword?: I can wield a sword very capably and I will if I have to

-Enjoy Farming?: I don’t farm at all because im usually on the move and don’t stay long enough to set up a farm

-Does your character have any special skills?: no more special than other elves

-A screenshot of your skin: http: //imageshack.us/photo/my-images/694/20110920170716.png/"]http://imageshack.us...0920170716.png/

-Other Information: well im ready to join anytime you get around to me

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

Please expand and improve your biography. Talk about your character's past and probable future in more detail.

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Please provide a better/more detailed answer for the following questions:

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind? What exactly is roleplaying, in your own words?

What are your ambitions?

[TheShadeboi 0]

Denied.

Please expand and improve your biography. Talk about your character's past and probable future in more detail.

You may check our Tutorial & Guides Forum for assistance in writing a good bio, there are many good Guides posted there.

Please provide a better/more detailed answer for the following questions:

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind? What exactly is roleplaying, in your own words?

What are your ambitions?

ok i edited it please check it

[Ivrae 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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