tomfaz application subbmision

[tomfaz 26]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:tomfazz

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:London GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes a few mistakes here and there but genrally good.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im attending high school at the moment the subjects i took were history, d.t and a one day release to the local college doing level one engineering.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:At the least 15 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:Around six months

-What do you know about roleplaying?:I understand that role playing is where you play the role of a a charecter you may have or may not have made up in this case someone you have made up, you would also make them up a story of thier life so you decide how he/she lives.So if i was roleplaying as Shakespear i would talk write and live how he would of lived.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect the server is going to be a very welcoming enviroment for all to play and just hang out, i also feel that the server would be a place to live a second life style so you can make yourself completely diffrent which would be a very nice get away for everyone every once and a while.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played a couple of other servers but left them due to griefing and the admins and moderators being horrible and banning people for fun.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes i have and i fully agree to the rules and understand without rules the server would be manic and take away the full experience the server gives you.

-Name the 4 races on this server:Humans,(with sub races of, the northener, the southerner and the haflinf.Orcs,(with sub races of the sharman, the nomad and the goblin.Then you get the dwarves,(with subraces of, the mountain dwarf, the forest dawrf and the cave dwarf.And finally you get the elves,(with subraces of, the wood elf,the high elf and the dark elf.

-How did you hear about us?:Browsing on planet minecraft and the minecraft forum.

-Did you vote for us?: Yes i voted on all three

-What was your favourite Law?: i have two actually, the no griefing law as it takes away some of the fun in servers and the no racism policy as its terrible how some are treated due to skin colour and religion.

-What was your least favourite Law?:No inapropriate names because what if your brother or sister makes the account and then give it to you there is no chaging your name, i think the should be a form to be filled out if your name is inapropriate saying what your reason is for having this name.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:tomfaz

In-Character:

-Character Name: Keble Farrington

-What is your Race?:Human

[b[-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:tomfaz

-Biography:The farringtons were a very poor family and didn't really have much money of items of worth, infact they only just had enough money to provide a little shack type house for them to live in.

There was four people in Kebles family, his mother a bar maid and bringing in the only money for the house, his farther a drunken bum and his little brother his farther didn't really act like much of a fartherly figure and was a terrible role model for his childern.He would come home drunken and then start to beat on Kebles mother and himself and his little brother.

One stormy night when Kebles bum of a farther came stumbling into the small little shack his mother had decided it was enough.She told him it was he either stops drinking and help raise the children or leave.Kebles farther so angry with rage dragged his wife by her hair to the little river out the front of there house and dround her. Keble and his little brother were scared out of their life and ran and they ran until there mad farther was out of sight.

Eventually one morning they came to a mile stone that said "Al'Khazar capital city of Oren and beholds the mighty keep of King Edmund Sheffield 33 miles straight of here. Keble and his little brother began to walk the rest of the way down the dirt track and around an hour later what they thought was a harmless old man said" afternoon boys you head'in for the great city of Al'Khazar"? Keble replied "yes mister we are could you please give us a lift we have been traveling for days". Not knowing that the old man was actually a criminal he let them hop into the back of his cart and headed towards the city.After another 2 hours of travel they arrived infront of the big gates of Al'Khazar as the guard greated the man also not knowing he was indeed a wanted man and asked him whats his buissnes was here. The old man simply explained the two young children in the back were robbing people as they walked past the road.

Foolishly the guard belived the old criminal and had the two children sentenced to a life time in prison. 10 years had pasted since the day they had run away from his home keble now 23 his little brother now 17 had been working in the prison dealing out the food and sweeping the floors.Around a week later Kebles little brother caught small box's and sadly took his life,Keble greaved of his little brothers death for week's and week's thinking this was the last family member he could ever have contact with.Until one foggy moring a guard came down and shouted "oi farrington you bale has been posted" this made keble wonder if there was still someone out there who cared for him.As he wandered out of the prison door he heared a quite little voice say "hello son" Keble turned and saw his farther standing there, with much rage keble walked over to him and struck him in the face with an almighty punch.His farther shouted out in pain and told him he needed to talk they went and sat down in an inn and his father told him about the past 10 years he had lernt from his mistakes and joined an army he was now a master swordsman and was perpared to show keble everything he new. One quiet sunny morning keble heard a gret scuffling he woke up in fright and saw his farther and other soliders leave the city, and that was the last he ever saw of his farther.

Keble then started helping out with little jobs around the city to earn himself some money and was eventually given the nickname " the good samariton" for all the help to people weather it was building or helping out with farming.One day when keble had enough money he decided to purchase his own little house in the woods and that is were he stayed for the majority of his life waiting for the perfect woman.

In the futre Keble hopes that he can make Al'Khazar a safe place to live so every one can enjoy living there weather there man woman or child without having to worry as much about the up rising eveil,he also hopes that he could go on his own aventures and explore the country of ageis and eventually write a book of all the adventures he went on.

-Character Age:25

-Character Appearance:Keble is a tall man standing around six foot he has dark brown eyes, and long black hair and stubble. He has a scar on his right cheek from when he was attacked by his farther as a child. Keble wheres a brown top with some chain mail armour underneath and also where brown trousers with a black belt and black boots. And is normally seen holding the handle of his sword with his left hand which shows people if they make this an unsafe place to live he will have a problem with them.

-Character Personality: He is a noble and brave man who does not really fight often but sure as ell will if he is threatend by people or make Al'Khazar an unsafe place to live by robbing and attacking.He is a very kind hearted man and genrally if hes not in his house he is helping the old or the poor have a better life.He is a really good samariton and a cheery bloke.

-Your ambitions:Kebles ambitons are, he wants to have himself a nice house with a wife and a son.He wants to be able to teach his son how to sword fight take him fishing and make himself a better rolemodel than his farther was.He also wants to go on his own adventures wround the world and see places and meet new people and then one day once he is settled with his family write a book of his adventures and life.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes he is a good writer but not very good at readfing.

-Can your character mine?: Never really done it but happy to try.

-Are you a capable builder?:He has dabled in a little bit of it and is confident that he could build himself a house.

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes he is a superb swordsman.

-Enjoy Farming?: yes loves farming and the idea of living on a farm and having some pigs sheeps horses and cows with a few chickens maybe.

-Does your character have any special skills?:Other than the ability to make everyone smile no matter what there mood is, no.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/content_round.php?page=done&l=img819/4225/20110925160648.png&via=mupload&newlp=1

-Other Information: i love what your doing with the server keep up the good work.

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.