Application for server

[Christan 3]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: PwnCaiks101

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States of America

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes i do.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am German,Canadian and Irish,I have deep black hair,blue eyes and i love hatorade.

I been playings RPGs since i was 9.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Week days:Maybe 3 hours Week ends: Maybe 5 1/2 hours a day.

-How long have you played minecraft?: For a year or since 1.5 CAME out.Not sure when 1.5 came out.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I know alot,like you need to /me for a action on most servers and that there is

OOC chat and IC chat.And that your not allowed to metagame,RDM mainly.I played RPG servers on,Garrysmod,Grand theft auto,Minecraft,

and Terraria , but alot of OpenAuras and Customs on garrymod mainly.(Dont know where to put this because no one would tell me,I think roleplay is

devloping your character with story and emotion without wealth or items.You devolep your character with drama,/me,actions,storys,decisons and emotion!)

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Like factionaction but without the bad admins and a TS3 channal.I image it like Lord of the rings

and the Medival times mixed together.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Factionaction,Lostcraft,Monstercraft,HL2RP,Post zombie RP and few minor ones;I left most of them

because of the bad admins or it was too full all the time.Or just because of the minges and or hackers.Like in Factionaction.They had very bad roleplayers and NO admins at all.

I longed of a good roleplay server on a game i liked with active admins,lots of players and decent roleplay.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have read,understood and agreed to the terms of service and rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Drawfs,Elves,Humans,Orcs

-How did you hear about us?: I was browseing the TS3 server list and i was listening to people playing on the server.It sounded interesting

and then i heard it was roleplay i was very interested and asked Shoi for the ip which led to her telling me i need a whitelist and i had to register here.On the fourms :D

-Did you vote?:Yes i did vote for LOC on all 3 of the links. :D

-What was your favourite Law?:Theft and you cant mine/log on someone elses area

-What was your least favourite Law?:Combat/fighting in city limits

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Christan? Its shown above.

In-Character: Orodreth

-Character Name: Orodreth Ancalimë

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: I use to live in a small Elven village North of the mainland with lots of willow trees and wheat growing.It was a beautiful smell.Well i was tending bars and serveing ale..I worked at the Jarls Inn as a bartender for 11 years.I was finishing my shift

up on a late night the bar was emptying,maybe 3 or 4 customers were there.I was cleaning a bottle then i heard growls and screams along with clashing of steel aganist steel and stone,the flicks of bows and thuding of the falling bodies.The town milita was fighting something

.I quickly hid in the bar not knowing what to expect.I jumped to see what made the crackling noise.Burning fire.I had to get out of the bar,i quickly jumped out the broken window.

Undead warriors.Ruined our village.I quickly got out my shock,which was made up of everyone suddening dieing around me- and first seeing

the ugly creatures that are undead.Fresh wounds,empty eye sockets,and ragged clothes but deadly,deadly weapons of war.When i reached my house i quicky grabbed my few items,Clothes,cloth,sticks,dagger,flint and a few Minas.I quicky ran west to find shelter.I took out my dagger and cut off a branch of a passing willow tree.And ran in to a cave and struck my flint on the dagger causeing a spark.Not good enough.I quickly attacked again and again till finaly i had the spark that hit the stick causeing a fire.FIRE! Yes!

I ran into the cave with the light not moveing so fast that it would burn out.I wast thinking clearly,i just heard screams and crackling fire in my head.Luckily the cave was a long ravine.Instead of going deep in a cave like a moron with just

one torch to light your way and a dagger.I went through a ravine and climbed out the other ending the cave.

To reveal a small house on the horizon.I ran to the small cabin i looked around quickly no inhabits.The owner must have been in town when the raid started.And was...."caught" in the crossfire.It contained food suppiles for 4 days and some wood to heat it.I was walking to the stone oven but hit a crack in the floor i fell off and bombed my head on the metalous floor.I slammed my foot in anger on the floortile to make it crunch open and show a passage.A passage into the soil of Aegis.I jumped down in curiousness not expecting what to come.Ow,what was that on my neck.OW.What is that?Breathing and a...knife!?The man behind me pushed me down,i couldt recongize his face because of the shady tunnel.A sudden crash and a slam as the trapdoor closed the stranger held his hand to my mouth.I heard thuding and crashing as they plundered the cabin.And a "tink" as a flameing coal fell in the crack of the floorboards and hit the tunnel floor.Then the sounds stoped.Then thudding.They were spotted.They were comeing them.

Then the light comeing from the crack told the stranger they were spotted as a undead hand was put on the crack."QUICKLY RUNNN!" Yelled the stranger it sounded like a male,he lit a torch with a flint and steel he had in his pocket.

The light showed 4 other men.2 middle aged ones and one that looked like me.Then the stranger.They were Elves.SURVIVORS!The shock almost got me killed but i got up and run without telling my lump and cut body.We ran from the undead warriors.We were lucky the warriors were slow.

But they were careing.Then i noticed why.A archer.A undead archer. "RUNN FASTER! THEY HAVE A UNDEAD ARCHER!" I yelled.Panting.We moved and dodged the arrows from the archer.But we weret so lucky."Uuughhhh!" Came from the middle aged man next to me,he got struck by a arrow in the chest.He fell over limp and bleeding.

We hit a fork and we still followed the olderman.We lost the undead warriors... "Where did that other path lead?" I asked panting "To a pit of lava" Said the stranger grinning

"Why did you attack me" I asked the stranger "I thought you were one of them" he replyed frowning

I took off my ragged hat revealing my blond hair and my Elf ears,the stranger gasped and asked if i was a survivor of the plundered village Northwest.I told him my story and he wrote it down.

"Your a publisher?" I asked with a tone after saying my depressing story."Yes,i record politics" He smilied warmly. A few days later the stranger said outloud "Alright time to head out".He told me were to find a Elven town.I thanked him and he moved a bookcase to reveal a hidden door.We said our farewells and promised to see each some day.Disapointment flooded me...That depends if i can survive long enough to see my new best friend...since my last one burned.

-Character Age: 270

-Character Appearance: Black hair,Ripped pants,Blue eyes,German accent,Scattered hair,scar on right arm,bandaged wound on left side of his chest.

-Character Personality: Hes polite and sensetive,he runs from most danger unless told otherwise.He loves to be in secret so people wont find him.

-Your ambitions: To find the order of undead that attacked my village and murder them with some hired mercs.

-Can your character read or write?: He can read German,A lil' English; He can write German,and British English he learned from the school in his village.

-Can your character mine?: From classes in his villages school He knows that if you hit a rock with a pick it will fall off.The black ore is coal;The bright yellow ore is Gold;the light blue ore is Diamond.

-Are you a capable builder?: He helped his father built their stone basement;Wooden stalks;Brick fireplace;Stone kitchen and wooden floors.

-Can you wield a sword?: He knows how to swing it without cutting off a limb from his younger days,playing "Knights and undead" with his friend and slaughtering pigs.He knows that you can block swings from a enemy by putting something infront of it,like a sword and isntead of your body.

-Enjoy Farming?: He worked growing wheat and sugercane before the age of 16 and got his job at a bar.He enjoyed farming untill summer came with the sun bleaming on him.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes a few minor skills-Running;Intelligence;Sneaking and disguse;Tradeing and being secret.

-A screenshot of your skin: I have a few-Example:Bartende skin,hoodie,ragged clothes,knight outfits and that.I wont use my knight skin of course.I would use my bartender skin,hoodie skin,citizen skin(s) and assasin skin(Love it :D) UPLOADING VIDEO AND SCREENSHOTS NOW!!!!!!

-Other Information: Not really much to know besides i have OCD and i hope you accept me to the brillant server :D

[Respiren 524]

Application is too long.

I also drink the hatorade

[Aeolwyn The Elf 139]

What exactly IS roleplaying

Your name is not an elven roleplaying name.

If your character is an elf at the age of 21, that is the same as a human being about 3-5.

[XDSub 1]

I am not passing judgement on whether or not he should be accepted but after reading his application and especially his bio I think it might be more prudent to give some sort of praise on effort here. He obviously took the time and put forth the effort to meet the intentions of the process. He is also 15 and he may not have an extensive fantasy background (I.e. Unfamiliar with the standard age ranges of elves for example.) In addition he most obviously chose a name he thought would suit an RP character. He did not chose Legolas or one of the 22 variations. He chose what he thought might be a normal name. (I agree it doesn't jive with common lore... He just took it in the wrong direction.)

So as I my application has not been reviewed either I offer this advice with a disclaimer.. Obviously take the cues from the Applications review team over my own. But here is what I think.

You did an excellent job creating a story for yourself, whether the App has the time to read it all, it will be of use to you once you are accepted and develop your character in the world of Aegis.

I would maybe go to a dictionary site and look up role playing. Then think about it and put it in your own words. Make sure you convey the full meaning as I have seen many apps that get denied for that reason.

In regards to your name I might do a little research on naming conventions... I looked quickly and found this, it may help.. Elven Naming Conventions

In regards to the length of your bio, I conveyed earlier that it is not a loss that it is too long, it will aid you in building your character. But to meet the intent of Respiren, cut out some of the narrative (where your having a conversation). A biography doesn't include quotes unless they are absolutely vital.

So, after you get that done just right click any word you see with a red underline and select the proper spelling as I see many apps get turned away for grammar and punctuation.

I hope this is helpful!

XDSub

[Aeolwyn The Elf 139]

[Respiren 524]

No - player banned