Daniel Starn's Application

[Bucky_24 132]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Bucky_24

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -6 Est Time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I think I am not too horrid at my grammer but I do forget to check over what I type sometimes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a active athlete so I am on all the time other than when I have school or sports. I love Minecraft and have RPed in other games like Runes of Magic and a few years ago Roblox

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I play as much as possible! I am highly addicted so I will be on the server every waking minute that like I said before I am not at school or sports.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Minecraft has just started around my school so I have been playing maybe a month? But I have been gaming for years! And already have a few days worth of hours put into Minecraft.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I know that roleplaying is the act of taking the persona of a character that was created for a video game or other purpose. It's the exact thing of acting just YOU get to write the script which makes it alot better and flow alot easier. I know that you can do almost anything that your character would or could actually do.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I except a server full of avid Role-Players that will take many adventures and the world will be shaped through yours and your fellow players stories.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I play sometimes on a server all my friends use but if I am excepted here I will likely quit it.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I totally understand the rules and I am willing to follow all the rules to the periods.

-Name the 4 races on this server: From what I read on the wiki there is Humans, Elves, Orcs, Dwarves, Undead, and The Accended was it?

-How did you hear about us?: Looking for a good skin on Planet Minecraft

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Bucky_24

In-Character:

-Character Name: Daniel Starn

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: Daniel grew up in the Dwarven Kingdom of Kal’Urguan. Here he and his brother (to be added later if my IRL brother actually joins) lived their life in poverty of their builder father. Their mother passed away giving birth to Daniel's brother. Being a human in a Kal’Urguan he didn't have many friends and was always being tormented for being weaker than the dwarven people around him. Now throughout his childhood he spent his time either lifting weights or sparing with others. He dreamed of become a guard but when we was old enough to join they decided that since he wasn't dwarven himself he couldn't be allowed to join the guard. Now he travels the world to try to find his calling. He is a very cocky and cunning guy when it comes to fighting but when he is asked about his childhood or is hurt to a degree he launches into a blind rage! Once he was sparing and someone accidentally sliced a scar on his left eye where he is not permentally blind in that eye. it took 4 guards to stop him from destorying

the entire city! He was put in jail for the next 5 years. He spent everyday working out to stay it peak shape for when he is released. Well that time is now and he is ready for all the challenges Aegis has to throw at him.

-Character Age: 25

-Character Appearance: big guy around 6ft 7in. He has a scar across his left eye do to a spar when he was a child. He also is wearing

-Character Personality: A silent guy but if you make him mad then you'd better run for the hills because little will calm him. He once when 7 days before he calmed down. He in that time destroid twenty houses and murder eighteen people. He is very shy about his upbringing and anything in his past before being put in jail. He also has trust issues and won't even think of trusting anyone to make him dinner unless he knows them really well.

-Your ambitions: To travel the world of Aegis then set up a small settlement where he can reside as ruler and live as he chooses.

-Can your character read or write?: Daniel never focused on writing or reading because it never fit his goal in life. To become a famous Adventurer!

-Can your character mine?: Daniel has never got the chance to mine even though he lived in Kal’Urguan which was a suprise to his father but Daniel didn't mind nor does he care what his father believes because he was never there for Daniel.

-Are you a capable builder?: Daniel is a pretty good builder due to his upbringing but he focused more on the bigger designs than his father's stalls or small sheds.

-Can you wield a sword?: Since Daniel is out to prove himself he

-Enjoy Farming?: Daniel would rather stare at a herd of cows than farm because atleast the cows move! Daniel is very impatient and gets bored VERY easily. He is always on the move, or atleast twiddling his thumbs.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Daniel is in better condition than most humans so that might be a skill for him.

-A screenshot of your skin: Its at bottom of the post. Also it is my profile picture.

-Other Information: I just have to say that my OOC dream of doing if accepted is to look at the crazy architecture that this by far the most beautiful server I have ever seen has. Also a personal goal is to start my own town which I hope is acceptiable. Please leave a comment if it is or not when you judge my application.

[Glandur 0]

I'm still waiting to be accepted to but if you want a little help I point out a few things.

Form the app guides I have read they really harp on grammar and punctuation.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I play sometimes on a server all my friends use but if I am excepted (should be accepted) here I will likely quit it.

Your biography has a few grammar errors and punctuation issues.

-Character Appearance: big guy around 6ft 7in. He has a scar across his left eye do to a spar (looks better if you put sparing incident) when he was a child. He also is wearing (here you did not finish what u were gonna say.)

-Character Personality: A silent guy but if you make him mad then you'd better run for the hills because little will calm him. He once when (should be went) 7 days before he calmed down. He in that time destroid( should really be destroyed) twenty houses and murder(ed) eighteen people. He is very shy about his upbringing and anything in his past before being put in jail.

-Can you wield a sword?: Since Daniel is out to prove himself he (another random dead end)

There was a few other minor errors but I did not wanna be to nit picky. Did you proof read before posting? If you would have u would a saw a lot of your spelling errors so maybe try that next time please.

That's what I saw that are easy fixes do not judge me I know I suck to, but you wanted to know what could be fixed. Good luck have fun!