Application please tell me what im doing wrong if i dont pass

[-Doggydigger- 1]

Out-Of-Character:Reed Rollings

-Minecraft Account Name:Doggydigger

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:eastern USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:For the most part I mispell things some times. Well a lot but its somewhat readable. Its my weakes area I have to say

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I like mincraft. I want to be a doctor. I also like to hang around people.Im in 8th grade but i take a few highschool classes. I've already taken my AcT if your not american its a test that helpes you rank yourself for collage.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:10+ have been as a wandersoul so pry more when im a member.

-How long have you played minecraft?:about 6 mon

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-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I know a little i like to practice as a soul.Like 2mon. Just vilagers and old days stuff.Role playing is when you take on a charater and try to be them at your best ablitys.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Well I've seen a lot of it but probuly fun and entertaining.From what I've seen as a soul its a very nice sever and I can't wait to join but I'll keep upgrading my application if I can think of more stuff but I'll wait for you distion

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-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Yogcast got bored.Also a lot of little severs.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and I love the lore.

-Name the 4 races on this server. orc ,elf ,human ,and dwarf

-How did you hear about us?:youtube from a guy named candel.

-Did you vote?:Yup like 20 times.

-What was your favourite Law?:No pvp in towns.Don't want to die while shopping

-What was your least favourite Law?:Ummmm..... war but thats not a law right?

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? doggydigger33

In-Character:Lorie

-Character Name:Lorie Smith

-What is your Race?:Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: doggydigger33

-Biography:Lorie live in a nomadic village. He was only 8 when a band of bandits can and destroyed his town killing his mother and father. Leaving him a helpless elven child. He wondered for days in the desert trying to find his parents killers but during his wonderings he had gotten sick. He passed out. When he woke up he was in a bed with a human standing over him. This mans name was Dan-the-Hunter. Dan taught him how to use a bow and taught him how to survive in the wild. When Lorie turned 20 Dan gave him the title Lorie-the-Hunter. When he had gotten the title of being a full flead hunter Lorie left to find and kill the bandits with his newly found skill. While he was gone Dan had been tempted into trading Lories soul for 5 diamonds. When Lorie came back Dan tied him up and gave him to the undead for 5 diamonds. Lorie was tortured and hurt in the udead’s hold but he managed to get away he meet a friendly dwarf who help him regain his health but he was still enjoired badly so he made his was to the temple where the monks healed him. It took many months for him to be fully healed but now he was ready to get revenge on the bandits, Dan, and the undead for all the trouble they caused him.

-Character Age:21

-Character Appearance:Black hair brow eyes and green cloughts.

-Character Personality:Strong and silent.

-Your ambitions:To become a secsessful elf in the buetiful city of laurilan.

-Can your character read or write?:Yes but it's not A favorite thing to do.

-Can your character mine?:Aye but I find it a wast of time and I dont like dark caves.

-Are you a capable builder? Well I can build a hut I've made a few good buidlings.

-Can you wield a sword?:yes but prefers a bow.

-Enjoy Farming?:Yes very much so.

-Does your character have any special skills?:Knows how to survive in the wild

-A screenshot of your skin:I didn't make it was the best elf skin I could find. http://skincache.com/skin?id=91506878

-Other Information:I like fishing its a fun past time(in character). :mrgreen:

[Guest Brian]

[wmb98 0]

Not trying to be mean but it would help him if you said what was wrong with it.