kingkiwionia 5th application[revised

[kingkiwionia 1]

-Other Information:Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:kingkiwionia

-How old are you?: i am 15 years of age

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Michigan eastern time zone America

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, Ican speak English, but I am a slow typer. And i have a hard time writing down what I am feeling.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a high school teenager. I spend most of my time at school and at football practice, and when i get the chance, i like to relax with some Minecraft

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: i will be on about every day from around 6:00-9:00 so about 15- 25 hours

-How long have you played Minecraft? : I heard about it last year and have playing ever since

-What do you know about role-playing? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know a bit about role-playing. I play with my friends in the back yard of my house. I am yet to understand the whole stats thing about live action role playing, but i got the whole character thing down. I can stay in character well. I know how it is about people acting as characters working together to create a story. I have played world of war craft, prates of the Caribbean online, an I have played RDR along with a couple star wars games as well

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Kind of like a mix of lord of the rings, Dungeons and dragons, and Minecraft, all just squished together in an awesome server of pure epic-osity!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on mercurycraft.net, and i am coming on to this server to try a Minecraft server with a story line to it.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes, i understand the ancient lore of aegis.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Elf, Ork, human, dwarf, besides ascended and the undead

-How did you hear about us?: my friend,(who is on this server) told me about it then showed me the trailers on YouTube

-Did you vote?: yes, I did vote. I voted for the new capitol city design

-What was your favorite Law?: i like the no greifing unless in war rule. It prevents grief when I peace, and when there is war, it adds a lot of fun!

-What was your least favorite Law?: being able to steal from people in proper times, because I don’t like loosing stuff. I know how it says you can only steal in reasonable amounts, but that varies from person to person. I could think a variable amount is like 3 stacks of stone, while another person would think it is everything but one thing left in the chest.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? kingkiwionia

In-Character:

-Character Name: Kiwian kiwionis

-What is your Race?: a human,

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: kingkiwionia

-Biography: Kiwian was an apprentice to the noble warrior, Arcadious. He spent most of his days living with this warrior, sharpening his sword, cleaning his armor, all sorts of things. But in return, the warrior taught him everything he knew. The warrior soon taught Kiwian how to create his own armor of of materials such as iron and diamonds. By the age 18, Kiwian and the warrior where inseparable. As they where walking through the woods they heard a scream of terror. As they ran to see what was happening, a lightning bolt slapped the earth! When they arrived, it was to late. they saw a hooded man, engulfed in flame, standing above the remains of a shattered citizen, the warrior charged. But the hooded man raised his arm, then it happened, Another lightning bolt struck the warrior, disnagrating him into ash. Kiwian was filled with rage and charged! the Hooded man swept his arm and the sword flew into a nearby tree. Kiwian knew he was finished. but then, a white light appeared! the old hooded man screeched "Ascended!"

Kiwian fled to his sword as a clash began, when he turned, all he saw was dust and shadows. He knew what has happened. He Knew, he was not meant to die. He sheathed his sword, Picked up the shattered cape of his dear friend the warrior, and went to avenge his death.

As he walked for miles upon end. Training with other knights and warriors, for years he marched through the land, training, working, fulfilling his dreams. Kiwian was walking down a path he found, when all of a sudden he was attacked by a vicious horde of zombies! He held them off, but they kept coming! Wave upon wave of them crashed into his armor, clawing and biting. But Kiwian learned something very special in his years of training. He respected the code of No Surrender!!! He fought and fought, until, an all to familiar white light appeared. With it a voice said, "follow me" so he did, escaping the horde just in time. Kiwian Appeared in a strange building of sandstone. He wondered where he was, when a monk came up to him and said welcome to Aegis. As kiwian explored the building he saw a path, as he walked it he Began to see the world in front of him, he began to feel the wind through his tattered cape, he began to think, he began to think of this new start to his life. He thought of this second chance. And so he walked.

-Character Age: 26

-Character Appearance: a hunter, wearing a brown sash and sheath, with a headband, a red spotted belt, and his masters old green tattered cape.

-Character Personality: kiwian is brave, loyal, funny, but gets serious when the time is right

-Your ambitions: kiwian wishes to be a hero, he want to be known, he want to save a town , he wishes for freedom and prosperity, he wishes to be remembered.

-Can your character read or write?: yes, He can read and write, but still has misspellings even at his age

-Can your character mine?: yes, he enjoys the time digging through rock and stone. he is strong and can take the hours of work

-Are you a capable builder? yes, He loves to build in his spare time, he likes to look at other castles and fuse them together in his own image of them

-Can you wield a sword?: yes, he is an experienced fighter,

-Enjoy Farming?: no, he doesn’t enjoy it, but will if necessary for survival

-Does your character have any special skills?:] I can plan a battle and end it before it starts.

-A screenshot of your skin: see my avatar. my skin pic wont work

[bungo 3965]

Denied

If you would improve your spelling and grammatical errors, that would be great and It would give you a much higher change in being accepted.