RYANHEFF 74 APPLICATION REVISED 2ND TIME

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Out-Of-Character: Leave this part blank.

-Minecraft Account Name:RYANHEFF74

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA EASTERN TIME

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I LOVE TO CLIMB THINGS IN REAL LIFE. I LOVE HOT DOGS. I LIKE MAKING FRIENDS

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: WEEKEND NIGHTS

-How long have you played Minecraft?:5 MONTHS OR SO

-What do you know about role-playing?:. ROLE PLAYING TO ME IS ACTING LIKE YOUR CHARACTER AND MAKING CHOICES THAT YOU WANT TO TAKE

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I EXPECT IT TO BE GOOD BECAUSE IVE HEARD GREAT THINGS ABOUT IT

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: PARDISE CITY AND RPG MINECRAFT.NET. I LEFT PARADISE CITY BECAUSE IT GOT BORING

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:YES

-Name the 4 races on this server:ELVES ORCS HUMANS AND DWARVES

-How did you hear about us?:YOGCAST

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:RYANHEFF74

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-Character Name: WOLF WOODSTOCK

-What is your Race?: ELF

-Biography: I WAS AN ELF WHO LIVED WITH HIS FARMING FAMILY IN THE WILDERNESS. ONE DAY A GROUP OF ORCS GAME TO OUR FARM KILLED THE LIVE STOCK AND MY FSMILY AND TIED ME TO A CHAIR TO MAKE ME WATCH IT ALL. I WAS 6 THEN NOW I AM 14. I LEARNED HOW TO HUNT AND WIELD A BOW AND ARROW IN ORDER TO SURVIVE IN THE WOODS. THEN I STUMBLED ON THE ELF CAPITAL CITY. I WANT TO BECOME A SCOUT OR RANGER ELF. I WANT TO MAKE SURE NO MORE ELF LIVES ARE TAKEN. THAT IS MY LIFE STORY.

-Character Age:14

-Character Appearance: DEEP GREEN EYES, PEACH SKIN, POINTED EARS, BROWN CURLY HAIR, CLOTHES MADE FROM CREEPER AND OTHER MONSTERS FROM THE WOODS, AND QUICK AND LIGHT

-Character Personality: BRAVE, LOYAL, AND A FLIRT AROUND FEMALE ELVES

-Your ambitions:SAFETY FOR ELVES, A HOME WITH WORMTH AND COMFORT AND A NICE LIFE

-Can your character read or write?: YES HIS FATHER TAUGHT HIM BEFORE HIS DEATH

-Can your character mine?: YES BUT ENJOYS FRESH AIR

-Are you a capable builder?: YES HE CAN BUILD A NICE SHELTER IN MINUTES

-Can you wield a sword?: YES BUT PERFERES A BOW AND ARROW

-Enjoy Farming?: YES

-Does your character have any special skills?: FARMING,HUNTING,GATHERING,AND TREE CLIMBING/HOPPING

-A screenshot of your skin:

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