mezular's application

[Lucian Aulius (mezular) 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: mezular

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: U.S.A Pennsylvania (GMT -05:00) Eastern Time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a minecraft addict who plays way too much, and I love SMP. I like mods, especially mod packs and love building. I like other video games such the legend of zelda and final fantasy.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I play about 2 hours each school day and 3 hours on weekends, so 16 hours a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since February 2011 .

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know that you have to act like your character and see things the way they do. The kind of role-playing is Dungeons and Dragons (tabletop). I have been role-playing for 5 months.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it sounds similar to fantasy games and adventure stories, both of which I love.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on a server called turf-wars, but left when they kept resetting the map and the server was lagging.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes to both.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Dwarfs, Elves, and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: I was searching for role-playing servers.

-Did you vote?:Yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: No use of 1337 speak, since it is annoying.

-What was your least favourite Law?: None, since all of the laws are reasonable.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: mezular

In-Character:

-Character Name: Cin

-What is your Race?: Elf

-LordofthECRAFT.net/forum forum account: mezular

-Biography: A man who loves exploring and adventuring to new places. Cin also loves combat and mining for diamonds. He loves making structures of all kind and is loyal to any side he falls on to.

-Character Age: 250.

-Character Appearance: Blue eyes, green shirt, black pants, carries a backpack, wears gloves, Blond hair, height is 6ft, and weight is 178lb.

-Character Personality:Kind, determined, brave, adventurous, and wise.

-Your ambitions: To become the best fighter and builder in all of Aegis.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes to both.

-Can your character mine?: Yes.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes.

-Enjoy Farming?: Not much.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Running.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: None.

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

There are errors in grammar and punctuation.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[Lucian Aulius (mezular) 1]

Thank you for the feedback. I will try my best to fix grammar errors and make my biography and answers longer.

[Lucian Aulius (mezular) 1]

Boy I've been editing my application it's harder than i thought.