Felix 30 Share Posted October 18, 2011 Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: wenderstreem -How old are you?:16 -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +1 Denmark -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: it’s ok I have no problem reading it and im fine to write it. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i love to play computer and do i a lot, I go to school and i love to begin big projects in minecraft -How much time could you be on the server weekly?:30 hours -How long have you played minecraft?:just after it went into beta -What do you know about role-playing? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:i have played wow for 3 years, I am a live action role player, I have played on several RP severs -What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the sever to be a well organized sever with good admins and a nice RP world, I have also seen let’s plays so I know how to behave and talk on the sever and I have also walked a little around so I know the sever -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i have played on some RP severs but the slowly got abandon do to bad admins, lots of griefing and thay were badly organized and up to 5 times at 1 week was they down. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes I have read understood and agreed to the rules and on the lore part: I have always been a big fan of lore so yes I have spent hours reading about Aenguls, Daemons, Ascended, the sages, the undead,the Modern and ancient History, how the nations are ruled and can’t wait to become a part of it myself -Name the 4 races on this server: Human, elves, dwarfs and orcs -How did you hear about us?: I heard about you on YouTube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q1k1vRLQ2zQ and some friends there play on the server ( i get the link from them ) -Did you vote?:Yes, on all 3 and more than once although I normaly like to try the sever before i vote I think you atleast deserve some votes for the lore and all the work there has been put in to the sever -What was your favorite Law?: there was more than one so you will have to live with what you have to stay in Character all the time, No mindless spamming, No griefing, No world grafitti or vandalism , No destroying of the worlds landscape -What was your least favorite Law?:not one of them are unfair so it’s gonna be a none of them from my -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?wenderstreem In-Character: -Character Name: my name is Rendur Schmidt -What is your Race?:elf, I couldn’t find the elven sub-races and there bonus stats but I think it’s gonna be wood elf -Biography: Today I am a hunter and farmer because my father taught me to live with everything around one and the day he died, I realized that this was what I should do and one day I had to turn into something big. larger than most, and that day I will go to heaven, my father being proud of me. Here is the story of my father’s death. Well I can’t remember much from my childhood, only that I lived in the forest and my father was a hunter. he taught my the code of killing, and how to hunt. I loved my father he was a good man, and god I miss him. he died while he was out hunting, he got bit by a snake I noticed he had been out hunting longer then normally. so I went out to look for him, I found him sitting dead by a big tree he was so cold. I just fell on my knees I was crushed, I dragged his body all the way back to the tent and put a carpet over him. then I ran faster than I had ever run before to the nearest elven town, and begged some men to come and help my bring his corpse back to the town and bury him. after his funeral I was lost, I didn’t know what to do. so I decided to practice my fighting, to fill up the hole in my soul, I wanted to fight like the wind. when the undead started to come to this world, I felt the code of killing calling my a dead man can not walk this world he is to be sent to the afterlife And so he shall. -Character Age: 26 -Character Appearance: he has green eyes, a nice stream lined face and a nice fit body with a few battle scars. -Character Personality: can be a bit harsh at times. but in his heart he’s a nice guy (a bit like the wind) so if he trusts one he is nice for him -Your ambitions: to become a part of the Ascended and his biggest dream is to become the sage of battle (and as far as I know you need some new to take over the Ascended and I am ready to put alot of work into it) -Can your character read or write?: yes and he is fine to it -Can your character mine?: yes but not so much he do it. if he want somehing will he try to buy it first -Are you a capable builder?: yes but he only builds I harmony with the nature -Can you wield a sword?: yes and he is quite good at it when he fights -Enjoy Farming?: yes he think it’s quiet relaxing -Does your character have any special skills?: he is a fine archer, he is quiet good at sneaking around, and he can run real fast like he always got the wind in his back and pretty good with a bow -A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/wood-elf-452 -Other Information: I have a lot of friends on the server so i will love to play with them again. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadles 85 Share Posted October 18, 2011 Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Check your spelling and grammar. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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