[Denied]terorek Application

[terorek 1]

-Minecraft Account Name:

My minecraft account name is Terorek.

-How old are you?:

I'm 13 years.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

The Netherlands.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I’m good in English reading and listening. But my grammar and writhing is not the best. Because I’m a Dyslexics.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a good minecrafter that like to play game’s at the pc. And I like to play whit other people in multiplayer servers. I'm good in building flying islands. And red stone is easy for me.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

12 hours I think.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

6 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

I don't have roleplaying before. But I think it’s very difficult because you must play like someone that you not are. It’s a little bit weird to do this in minecraft. But I know that if you are good in acting it isn’t really difficult. I think because it is new for my it is a little kind of difficult. But I learn fast and I’m good in acting. I think if I play it like 3 days I’m in my character.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think that you can do many things like play whit other people and build your one land/city. I hope that I can do lots of stuff and that I have fun whit everyone. I think I’m fast in exploring the server and know everything about it.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Just many and I don't leaf them (not all). If I leaf them it was because I had nothing to do. And there was now match stuff and there are not many people.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

I read de rules and I know that you don't may grief and stuff like that.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Humens,dwarves,Elfes and orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:

The trailer from Reckreations on YouTube.

-Did you vote?:

Yes I vote.

-What was your favorite Law?:

No grief. Because it is stupid to destroy other people's work. And if you work real hard at it, it is just irritating

-What was your least favorite Law?:

They are all good. And there is not one that isn’t true or stupid.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

My forum name is Terorek.

In-Character.

-Character Name:

My Character name is Terorek.

-What is your Race?:

Elf because I like the ears and nature.

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

My forum name is Terorek.

-Biography:

Terorek is a great and wise elf but not very old. He was born in a small elf village. Nobody knows where. His parents died when he was two. Because of the undeads. And the nature and the people in the town have raised him to what he is now. He leaves the village when he was fifteen. And live 10 years in the wildy. He was always good whit bow and arrow. And he like to build things like secret roads, flying islands and farms. because of that he survives the wildy. When he was twenty-five he leave the wildy. And went back to the kingdom of Aegis. And he is now strong enough to fight back. He wanted to build a nice wizard tower at a flying island whit many secrets in it. And he wanted to be an ascended if he gets the chains. He is good in magic and now the elfes are real forest people. His dream is to become a great wizard and have a nice land to live. He lives always close to trees and love them. And he real wanted to kill the undeads!

-Character Age:

He is 25 years old, and is real fit.

-Character Appearance:

He wears a cape whit many colors green, because of that he can hide easy in the forest. He has little eyes there colors are blue. On his back he has a bow whit a arrow. He have a neck led that he get from his dad before his dad died.

-Character Personality:

He love's nature because of that he like farming to. He always wants to help people. He is a good hunter whit bow and arrow. He like to play whit magic. And isn't the best miner. But if he need he can do everything. Red stone is not really difficult for him. And his cape let him hide in the wildy.

-Your ambitions:

A good farmer that just fights if he real need. He can build nice buildings. And love’s to make many secrets in it. Also is he good in magic and he is good whit a bow.

-Can your character read or write?:

Yes he is real good at that. And He loves to write story's of people that fight to the undead. And he wanted to have a big library.

-Can your character mine?:

Yes but is not the Thing that he like really match. Because it’s underground were is now light. There are now stuff like grass or trees.

-Are you a capable builder?:

Yes I'm. I can build many things but I'm real good in flying islands and red stone. What I wanted is to make a wizard tower on a flying island what many secrets and a big library.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes but I don't like it really, magic and bow is more my thing.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Yes real match. Because I’m than one whit nature. If I make farms it feels like I’m real free.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

Trees grow really fast if he stand next to. And he can learn fast. He can build nice things if he wants like automatic redstone things and flying islands.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e9e7e57ecb9c9920239161629234967970

-Other Information:

I'm not sure how to use my skin. And is the server 1.8.1?

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

It is all in bold and hard to read.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[terorek 1]

I've changed my stuff i hope it is good now.

[terorek 1]

I've chains my Application again and i hope it is now real good.

[terorek 1]

Just a bumb! :wink:

ps. If you like my stuf say it!

[Lirinya 4021]

You need to read the guides and go through the application. I.e Flying islands aren't RP. Also, do not edit this application. Repost a new one in a few days time.