about coolkoen37

[therminausmac 0]

Out-Of-Character

-Minecraft Account Name:coolkoen37

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia Eastern Standard Time Sydeny

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:i am ok i am good at most grammar but not spelling

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:i try to help people and i am very into good servers and want to be a archer if possible for the army against the undead

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:around 5 too 7 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:around 1 and a half years

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:i have payed on one other but it was like a community server

-What do you expect this server will be like?:pure awesomeness

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:night craft and because i got bored of non pvp and people didn’t play very well

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:yes i have

-Name the 4 races on this server.orc,human,elf and dwarves

-How did you hear about us?:from a friend you no

-Did you vote?:yes

-What was your favourite Law?:no griefing

-What was your least favourite Law?:they are all good

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? coolkoen37

In-Character:

-Character Name: therminausmac

-What is your Race?:elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: therminausmac

-Biography:i am a 17 year old boy named therminausmac and i was on a boat till we got attacked by undead.i was on my way to help in the wars but we got attacked first so i said to my self i will not rest until all the monsters and undead have no head so i found myself on a beach and then someone carried me to (spawn) somewhere and helped me get better and then i left.

-Character Age:27

-Character Appearance: looks like a fighter with white hair and blue eyes

-Character Personality:nice and i try to be very helpful

-Your ambitions:to help destroy undead

-Can your character read or write?:yes

-Can your character mine?:yes

-Are you a capable builder?yes

-Can you wield a sword?:yes

-Enjoy Farming?:not very much

-Does your character have any special skills?:quick learner

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/