Jalois' Application

[Jalois 0]

Please ignore the application posted in 'How to Join', I was mistaken as to where I was to post this.

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Steverb

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Certainly.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I love Minecraft as well as other creative games. I also enjoy spending time on the Internet as well as reading, writing, and drawing.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: An average of about an hour.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Nearly a year.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Role-playing is the art of removing one's own thoughts and feelings and acting, thinking, and talking like a completely different person. 3 or 4 years. I make small movies occasionally, as well as participate in collaborative efforts with two or three people in a sort of real world role playing game.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Incredible. I looked at the rules and the wiki, and it seems very well constructed.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on a server called Barbour World, and it got boring after a while because it was so small that I rarely saw any other players.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes to both.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Elf, Dwarf, and Orc, excluding the Sub-races.

-How did you hear about us?: I saw a well done trailer, and thought I'd check it out.

-Did you vote?: Yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: No destroying of the world's landscape.

-What was your least favourite Law?: You must have a forum account to play on the server.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Jalois

In-Character:

-Character Name: Rammor

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum  forum account: jalois

-Biography: Rammor's mother died of a terrible illness when he was young. He is the only child of a merchant father. After his mother died, his father was stricken with grief and began to ignore work and life itself until he slipped into a state of sleep akin to a coma. Rammor kept up the small shop his father owned in Al'Khazar, and did his best, struggling to pay his father's medical bills and to survive. Through trial and error he soon learned the tricks of the trade and became fairly successful. At the age of 15, Rammor traveled to Krugmar and snuck into the city carrying his father on his back. He managed to convince a shaman to care for his father, and departed to roam the lands of Aegis. Rammor went from town to town as a traveling merchant and a jack-of-all-trades, selling what he could, and taking any chance to get a bargain. One night he was travelling through a part of the Wilds to meet with a prospective customer when he met with a band of Zombie Pigmen. Grunting ferociously, they cornered him against the bottom of a cliff as he slashed wildly with his sword. Bleeding from his many wounds, Rammor fell to the ground and slowly died.

-Character Age: 26

-Character Appearance: Bearded with shaggy orange-brown hair and a white shirt. He wears leather pants and gloves with black leather boots. Additionally, he has strikingly brilliant blue eyes.

-Character Personality: Ambitious and adventurous, but also rather foolhardy.

-Your ambitions: To become rich and famous, and to find a cure for his father. He hopes to learn sword fighting as well.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, fairly well.

-Can your character mine?: A little bit.

-Are you a capable builder? If the need demands it, but he doesn't have much design skill.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but with horrible form.

-Enjoy Farming?: Somewhat.

-Does your character have any special skills?:] He's very good with money.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: He dislikes use of magic, as he considers it rather unorthodox.

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Your character biography is too short.

Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/