ultracougar's Application

[ultracougar 0]

-How long have you played minecraft?:

2 Years.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

Rolepalying is essentially taking and playing out the role of the character you've chosen, as if they are you. Basically, acting. I've been roleplaying since I began playing World of Warcraft a couple years back. I usually played on RP servers and definitely enjoyed having that extra bit of realism to the game. Stopped playing about two years ago, and since have started RP'ing in Minecraft a bit. I've played on Kingarmy's server, Buxville, The Vault RP, Ruined World, and Lands of Navia, all of them RP servers. I also enjoy playing a fair bit of RP-adventure games like any of the Elder Scrolls games, The Witcher, Demons Souls, ect.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I'm hoping this server will be full of literate, mature people who are serious about roleplaying. I also hope that server will have the number of people neccesary to make a truly epic roleplaying experience possible. Usually, the RP servers I have played on have had an average of 15-25 people, which, while entertaining, never had the truly epic feel. Hopefully the large amount of players on this server will give me what I've been looking for.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Kingarmy's server- Left because very few people played.

Buxville- Not entirely an RP server. Very immature and inimmersive feel to it.

The Vault RP- Serious rp'ers and fun, but left because of very little interaction and tons of people who just didn't get it.

Ruined World- Left because of server closure.

Lands of Navia- Left because of server closure. Best server I've ever played on.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yes, Yes, and Yeeesssss.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Humans, Dwarves, Elves, Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:

Googled "Serious minecraft roleplay server'.

-Did you vote?:

Yessir.

-What was your favourite Law?:

'You must keep in character.'

-What was your least favourite Law?:

There isn't any I disagree with, but If I had to choose, I'd pick

'You must have a forum account to continue playing on this server.'

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

ultracougar

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Gurbosh Mokjaw

-What is your Race?:

Orc

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/user/29223-ultracougar/

-Biography:

Gurbosh grew up in a small tribal village of 10 or so on the outskirts of Krugmar, never fully realizing his orcish roots and the nation to which he supposedly belonged. As a young child, he possessed an odd interest in construction and creative pursuits. Along with creative interests, he'd often wander into the dunes and return late at night. He had a thing for adventure and exploration. In his many nights in the desert, and in the small forests he managed to explore outside the desert, he learned vital survival skills, and how to fend for himself. He learned valuable swordsmanship skills fighting viscious animals and any hungry mammal that dare mess with him. He was not the best swordsman, but what he learned made him a capable fighter, and it was better than having known nothing of swordsmanship. Other times, he'd often sit alone and make little mud men and homes for them behind his hut. He was constantly thinking of ways to express himself and often drew paintings with dyes he created out of wildflowers and other things laying around. These intrigues followed him into his mid-life and adulthood. When he was old enough to begin recieving education from the tribe elder, he did so with zeal and learned all he could. Even though it was considered blasphemy in his tribe, he obtained and read as many human books as he possibly could, soaking up as much information as he possibly could about the arts and the crafts, and much more on the theory and practice of architecture and construction, something with which he was equally interested. It was difficult, but he managed to learn the human language and how to read human books. He never would have suceeded were it not for a member of the tribe who had learned the language, that offered to teach him as much as he knew.

At 25 years of age, he set out for the capital city of Krugmar, in hopes of realizing his dream of forging his name and making his fortune. He was tired of the averageness and dullness of his tribal life and the meaningless jobs he did there. His dream was to design the greatest buildings and constructions the world had ever witnessed! He had a grand plan, of someday, forming his own city, One much different from that of the average orcs. One of science and technology, and perfectness. One that was one with education and enlightenment, and possessed all which we could ever want. But in order to achieve this, he must start out small. He hopes that the nation of Krugmar will offer him and opportunity to begin his path to success.

-Character Age:

25

-Character Appearance:

Rough, like any orc, but suitably maintained. His hair is cut short and his tusks are filed down. He wears an average orc getup, but strays from spikes and other agressive dresswear.

-Character Personality:

Gurbosh knows what he wants, and usually obtains it to the best of his ability, but he is still passive and unnagressive when it comes to social matters. He is not one to start a fight, and while he maintains a close group of friends, he isn't a 'popular' orc. He will starchly defend any of his ideals or morals. He is usually friendly, if somewhat socially akward, and trys to be someone with whom he himself would want to have a friendship.

-Your ambitions:

To build a utopia that goes against orc values, and emobodies science, technology, and education.

-Can your character read or write?:

Yes, thanks to much reading done in his childhood.

-Can your character mine?:

He can gather stone and other extreme basics, needed for survival, but is incapable of large projects and mass mining.

-Are you a capable builder?

Yes, exceptionally.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes, not as great as some, but better than others.

-Enjoy Farming?:

He has never attempted it. He has only tended to small gardens and such near his hut as a young orc.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

He has essential survival skills and can survive in the wilderness for extended periods, along with a solid grasp of architecture.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/810/20111020190447.png/

-Other Information:

The server looks great! I'm really excited and can't wait to try it out. Thanks for reading, by the way. :)

[Jadles 85]

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