SpottedSnails Submission (Rusty Houff)

[SpottedSnail 1]

Out-Of-Character: Anthony

-Minecraft Account Name: SpottedSnail

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern time zone

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: My favorite game is Minecraft and I played football for 2 years. And I love roleplaying games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly? 14+

-How long have you played minecraft?:since Beta 1.3

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know that when roleplaying you have to stick to your character and I have played roleplaying type games since I was about 7. I guess I played like knights and dragons type games.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Well I have heard good things about this server and expect it to be very fun and enjoying.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on my own server with my friends, I didnt leave it but I had to stop playing it because it didn't work.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes I have agreed to the rules and understood them, and I believe it will keep a nice stable environment. And the Lore sounds very peaceful and beautiful.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orcs

-How did you hear about us?: Youtube, I was on the Yogscast's channel

-Did you vote?:Yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: No destroying of the worlds landscape, I would not like to see Aegis get ruined.

-What was your least favourite Law?:None, they all sound good and in no way will effect my gaming.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Spottedsnail

In-Character:

-Character Name:Rusty Houff

-What is your Race?:Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:Spottedsnail

-Biography:Rusty was abandonded as a child because Orcs killed his Mom and Dad, and now Rusty wants revenge. And Rusty and Dusty were then taken into care by a poor farm family that treated them like they where their own children. The family taught us how to read, write, and farm. At the Houff's house we spent a lot of time reading and writing short poems of the wilderness or of the farm. And me and my brother spent almost 2-5 hours a day working on the farm and the rest reading and writing. Those years living with Dusty we did almost everything together.And soon the family forced us into the army at age 14 which split me and Dusty up for 2 of the 4 years in service. We were quite successful in the army and graduated after four years of service with medals and honor and pride in our hearts. Me and Dusty came to Aegis to get away from it all but it seems Aegis is actually the home of the Orcs, and instead of getting away from it all it just encouraged us into wanting to get revenge. I know we were taken in by a nice loving family but the sight of my mom and dad being killed was just to much to handle. And now one of our prime objective is to avenge our mom and dads death, and with our training in the army and belief in our hearts I believe we will succeed.

-Character Age:19

-Character Appearance: Tall muscular with broud shoulders and a sleek face. And a handsome man with blonde hair and hazel eyes.

-Character Personality:Nice and peacefull, and intelligent and is protective towards his brother.

-Your ambitions: Wants vengeance from the Orcs for his mom and dads death. And also wants to meet a nice women and have a family and settle down in a farm like his adoption parents.

-Can your character read or write?:Yes, though his adoption parents were quite poor they where very fascinated with reading and writing and taught us(Rusty and Dusty) how to read and write.

-Can your character mine?:Not his best skill, but yes.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes, he can make pretty well styled houses but nothing way to advanced.

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes, Rusty knows many tactics in sword fights.

-Enjoy Farming?:Yes, life at the Houff's house was spent alot in the farm.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, the army has spent a lot of time teaching him sword and hand to hand combat.

-A screenshot of your skin: Its the soldier skin

http://minecraftskin...views&link=7051

-Other Information:Rusty loves bread.

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Your character biography is too short.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

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