The Fall To Black

[kurk brak 70]

(( I don't mean to FUSS or anything. But there are SO many improper ellipses within your story, it makes me want to kill a kitten. Instead of "..." You use, ". . .", making it proper.

Do not fail me. I believe in your grammatical abilities, Lucas.

~You-Know-Who! :mrgreen: ))

[susitsu 871]

(( I don't mean to FUSS or anything. But there are SO many improper ellipses within your story, it makes me want to kill a kitten. Instead of "..." You use, ". . .", making it proper.

Do not fail me. I believe in your grammatical abilities, Lucas.

~You-Know-Who! :mrgreen: ))

You could at least compliment the story you know...

[JCQuiinn 168]

Well, looks like I have to kill you now Susitsu.

[susitsu 871]

Ive done so many more things in this a lot more than is here now. I'm pretty much worse than a number of the undead now.

[argonian 14254]

Well, looks like I have to kill you now Susitsu.

Nah, leave it to me, I still have enough cookies to lure him to my trap.

[susitsu 871]

A number of FoA remnants have failed, do you think victory shall be yours so easily? I have prepared for this, I no longer need any cookies! I have the true discipline of a warrior!

[Cosmik 220]

A number of FoA remnants have failed, do you think victory shall be yours so easily? I have prepared for this, I no longer need any cookies! I have the true discipline of a warrior!

You seem to forget that the path to destruction has melons growing alongside it.

[Destroyer_Bravo 1054]

A number of FoA remnants have failed, do you think victory shall be yours so easily? I have prepared for this, I no longer need any cookies! I have the true discipline of a warrior!

I am a remnant of the FoA, I still bear the patch. At some point, I'll regather the Remnants to reform the FoA.

[Samson Option 9652]

[susitsu, kudos for the well-written and developed Lore concerning your character; I applaud such intelligent endeavors and hope you continue this!]

[susitsu 871]

Thank you very much for that Gaius, nicest comment Ive gotten on here :o

[argonian 14254]

I am a remnant of the FoA, I still bear the patch. At some point, I'll regather the Remnants to reform the FoA.

((Doooooooooo it!))

[Kragnak 22]

Although I'm sure you view my RPing as poor, I'm going to compliment your story anyways, because I ain't no troll. Your story is simply amazing and awesome.. and you roleplay extremely well from that one time I've actually met and "fought" you, and you've helped me be a better roleplayer simply by beating my character's face into a wall. I hope we cross paths again, since apparently you've got a story with the FoA.. And I'd like a bite into that too :P

[susitsu 871]

Actually Ahkaerl, I don't go around being over judgmental, and another thing, I found your RPing to be very good in fact, you seem sort of new cause Ive never really seen you, but you did very well in rp. I hope to rp with you more.

[Lynden 16]

((really well-done story... thats all I have to say :smile: ))

[susitsu 871]

Thanks :D I may start another story at the end of Aegis.