Congors Application

[Congor 0]

I wrote this over two days, and I hope I didn't spend too much time babbling.

Enjoy the story.

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Congor

-How old are you?:

I am fifteen.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

My time zone is minus six gmt and I live in the united states of America.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I quite think I do, thank you very much, however I have ad-hd and sometimes I think faster than I can type, causing things like ; instead of ‘. Correctable accidents.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a average Joe. I have a great personality and have been called funny. I am a caring person and always open to hearing about a persons bad day. I can be quick to temper if a person offends me with the same offense over and over again, and may act rash. However it is of high importance of me to keep my own personal feelings away from my characters and his actions. I am honest and honorable, and do my best to not lie. I do believe that I am ever so slightly arrogant, but aren’t we all? I can be a fun person and a great role-player.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I am available three or four hours a day generally, a lot more on the weekends. I don’t generally have plans but there are some acceptations. I am in high school so not in the mornings or noon time.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

I bought minecraft way back in alpha and am very experienced.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

Oh… gosh… three years now? My first roleplay was on a WoW hardcore roleplay realm. I learned all the tricks and trades in there. I have been on numerous WoW roleplay servers since then, a hand full of minecraft, and I have an expanse of Dungeons and Dragons campaigns that I have participated in. My most memorable is where I was a purple demonoid dragonborn who mounted a drake with a crowbar, some rope, and a drow elf broad over his shoulder, Good times.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

As the number one roleplay server on minecraft I expect nothing less than excellence! A vast world to explore with many a story to unfold!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Oh… again, god… I believe my most recent was the “middle earth roleplay server”, the reason I left them was because their applications were way too open and tons of people who were looking for free build got in. The one before that I don’t recall it’s name, but I left due to the server shutting down. *sad-face*

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read the rules and all are reasonable. I have no objections to them. The lore is well crafted and I have no words of offence to it.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

What kind of question it this? I guess a spam filter.

Humans Dwarfs Elfs and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:

A few of my soft-core roleplay friends applied and were denied, and that’s when I knew that I should look into this server.

-Did you vote?:

Of course, there were only three huge buttons.

-What was your favorite Law?:

I would like to point out your misspelling of the word favorite, (I fixed it)

You must follow your kingdoms laws. A good solid government is always a bonus.

-What was your least favorite Law?:

Why deny such reasonable rules of conduct?

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

Congor

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Shandar Hazanu

Alias: Sha’ha

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Congor

-Biography:

Shandar Hazaun was a born farmers brat outside the Kingdom of Oren, dirt poor from the very beginning and dirt poor to date. His mother was a cheese maker and a skilled one too. He had for siblings, one sister and two brothers. His father, on the other hand, was a gruff angry sinister man, and a drunk. It’s an extreme wonder as to how Garushi Hazanu was able to run a farm! His brothers were shining examples of his father, but Shandar was an Even as a farmer, the family was suspiciously wealthy.

What I just described was around the age of two, for things went sour. As it turned out, his father was a man of secrets, criminal secrets. He ended up owing a large sum of money to a criminal leader. His father, devious and betraying as he was, gave his wife and daughter instead of trying to flee or pay him off. The criminal leader, while satisfied with the payment, had no use for slaves, so he sent his men to the house. At the age of four Shandar witnessed his mother and sister brutally raped and murdered.

Once he was sixteen, he had all but forgotten what had happened; even now he has nightmares. He always asked why, and his father said “Because she was a *****, the filthy ***** stole some money from a rich man”. Alas, one night while working in a bar he overheard a few drunk thugs reminiscing over some old stories. They stumbled upon a story about a broad and her daughter who had been given to pay back a loan. He mustered as much courage as he could and boldly asked “Whose wife and daughter was that?” The man looked at him right in the eye and said “You should know, you were there” The whole crew burst out laughing as the sixteen year old kid stumbled back into the bar.

That night while the men were plenty drunk and asleep, Shandar took the cooks knife and slit their thoughts. One, the last, was fairly sober, and when Shandar bent over him he woke up. To no prevail he tried to struggle, bet Shandar, with murder in his eyes, stabed the man in the chest, over and over again until he was soaked in blood. Still not satisfied that the crime was just, he walked home, knife in hand. He silently crept into his fathers’ room, and stuck the knife into his heart. He felt satisfied, but there was one problem, his brothers saw. Then ran screaming for the guards and Shandar had moments to flee. He ran east into the deserts and there he hid, for over fourty years of his life. His brown eyes turned gray to deflect heat, his hair aswell. His skin tanned darkly and he lived among a caravan. Those fourty years were truly uneventful.

Only in this past month has the man returned to Oren, facing the city once more.

-Character Age:

56

-Character Appearance:

A strange character, muscular in build but small in stature, he seems very flexible and agile. His skin is very dark, but you can tell it’s a tan, and he is naturally fair. His eyes are a strange dull grey and he wears a blue dust mask and very light white clothing. Everything is tinted brown from sand.

-Character Personality:

Sha'ha is a quiet, old, mysterious person. The aura around him seems to creak with age. he does not enjoy "fun" things, as he is a mentally drained person. Hard work and progress is all that matters in life. He seeks redemption for his unjust deeds, but subtlety lets it affect how he reacts to most situations. He is unusually nice to young girls, like his sister was, out of grief. His words are not intelligent nor wise. He is a simple man as he was when he was young.

-Your ambitions:

-To finally learn to read and write.

-To become a great scholar.

-To find some redemption for his blood thirsty slaughter.

-To become wealthy through right ways.

-To fight against crime.

Or

-Rule all the crime in the city

-Amass great wealth and respect.

((depending on who he meets and what he has to do to survive in his new life))

-Can your character read or write?:

No, because he was poor for his child hood and lived away from literate people for most of his life.

-Can your character mine?:

No, as mining in a desert is extremely difficult and generally has low revenue compared to crops or food.

-Are you a capable builder?

No, he lived in trade caravans for the beginning of his life.

((he can construct a tent. [fence posts and wool] ))

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes, he trained in the art of swords craft in his years away from civilization.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Yes, he has some skill because of his early life, and it was necessary to live in the desert.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

He knows his way around a lock, he has some skill in sneaking about, and he has keen hearing, as being one step ahead of headhunters was always a bonus.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://s1091.photobucket.com/albums/i390/CongorMcPenguin/Public/?action=view&current=Mychar.png

-Other Information:

Shandar is a quiet fellow, for speaking is hard and his voice is old and rough.

He also goes by Sha'ha to avoid detection.

[Jadles 85]

A good try, however:

Please re-write your role play answer to explain what you think role playing is.

Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[Congor 0]

Please re-write your role play answer to explain what you think role playing is.\

I don't quite understand, as there was not a question to what I believe roleplay is. Are you saying that my back story was too much of a story and not enough of a roleplay?