Jacko1029's 2nd Application

[Lodreun Maldocraft 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

My Minecraft account name, is Jacko1029.

-How old are you?:

I'm fourteen years old, since the second of February two thousand and eleven.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

I live in the United Kingdom (Gmt 0)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I feel I understand the English language well, but i'm 14 and still at school, so there's many things I haven't learnt yet, so there is most definitely things I don't know.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

My name is Jack Fletcher, i'm 14 and I play minecraft every couple of days, if not everyday.

I tried, and wanted to learn Java coding, but it proved to difficult for me to learn, I like to see results relatively quickly, i'm quite an impatient person. I'm short, only 5'8 at 14, and slightly chubby, or slim even.I'm annoying sometimes, but i'm honest and i'll always do the right thing, regardless of whether it's small or not.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I could be on the server quite a lot, but it would vary weekly, depending on whether I really wanted to play minecraft to be honest, there's many other things I can do instead, so it's only really when I feel like it, so maybe 1-2 hours a day, 5 days a week, maybe half an hour on Saturday and a lot more on a Sunday.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

I've been playing minecraft for about 6 months, since a few of my friends started playing it, they got me into roleplaying, showing me that graphics aren't everything, but a GUI would be helpful.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

I used to play D&D, not a lot but I knew the basics, I like roleplaying games and I like the elder scrolls series, if that counts, when I played D&D I used to play a cautious Druid, which our DM didn't particularly like, long story short I died quite quickly, and exited myself from the game, and decided to play another one, learning that not all Dm's are the same, and you'll find one that works for you. Role playing is just basically taking another persons personality, or characteristics and "being" who they are, whether they're fictitious or not.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect this server to be relatively good, but I won't know until, or if my application gets accepted, I played as a wandering soul for a few minutes, I don't know how you did that, but it's a great way of doing things, without getting griefed.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played Speshville, I had my own server set up via Hamachi, but I want to play minecraft now, and not host it. With Speshville, I found out a few days ago it was going down, the owner didn't want to pay for it anymore.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

I have read, understood and agreed to the rules, I read the lore, also, It seems interesting, and full of different possibilities.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Elfs, Dwarfs, Humans and Orcs, not including the Noble Races;

the Ascended and the Undead

and the Ancient Races;

the Aengul and Daemons.

-How did you hear about us?:

I heard through Eddie442 and KINKYWINKLE told me about it, how they came across it, I don't know, maybe through Reddit or something like that?

-Did you vote?:

I voted using "Vote" and "Vote 1" but "Vote 2" Told me I had already voted, i'll try again if need be.

-What was your favourite Law?:

"Excessive harassment is a fine able offence" I like the idea that you can demand combat as a satisfaction, it seems like an extra front to roleplay.

-What was your least favourite Law?:

"Theft is a punishable offence" - It doesn't allow thievery between players, so the players don't think about hiding and hoarding their most valuable items, which realistically you would do, you wouldn't exactly try to show them off, would you? It's like being asked to be robbed.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

Jacko1029.

In-Character:

-Character Name:

My name is Lodreun Maldocraft, please do not beat me.

-What is your Race?:

Aye, I am a Human.

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Lodreun Maldocraft/Jacko1029

-Biography:

Lodreun Maldocraft is a Human who was exiled from his own race, because of his horrible birthright, his mother a human, his father in exile, he was born a "monstrosity".His parent's had to keep their relationship, and Lodreuns father himself, a secret, this caused a lot of suspicion around the community, and eventually they got found out.His mother was tasked with exiling him herself, which she had no problem doing, since he was the reason she was embarrassed and was now hated by her friends, even her family had turned on her.Lodreun lived his life barely getting by from a young age, he has hardened since his exile and has been accepted back on the grounds that he is a skilled fighter, skilled with both bow and sword, ready to fight a war with any of the nations, he is still rejected by many of society, even his own mother refused to talk to him before being dragged away by orcs, to either be devoured, or taken away as a hostage.His father, the exile, died soon after Lodreuns birth, he was slaughtered for "Defiling" Lodreuns mother.

After this, his mind was already quite mature even at his young age, so he was devastated by his loss of parents, knowing deep inside that they felt guilty as did he for ruining and killing his father, indirectly. When he was exiled, he tore towards the sunset, and struck against the earth trying to make himself a house, he was rewarded with calloused fingers, sore knuckles and a head that relentlessly pounded against him, each beat of his heart causing more pain to go through his body, but as he sank to the floor, he smiled, for the first time ever.He, Lodreun Maldocraft, had built his own house, at 2 years of age.

He continued this way of life for several years, the toils and spoils of wars between nations passing him by, but he was always at home in his place near the woods, where he had everything he needed, and could ever want right there, he was a solitary person by nature, perhaps that's because he never knew anyone, but he doesn't condone friendship, which helped him with the animals of the forest, he was very nearly vegetarian at the thought of killing his friends..The sheep, chickens, wolves, even creepers seemed to leave him alone, and not hurt him, his fortune bode well, until a scout party from one of the nearest cities came upon him and attacked him, he put up a great fight, fighting well, injuring two of them, wincing as he did so, but the captain stopped the scouts from fighting, he recognized something about Lodreun, and as much as he tried to hide it, Lodreun knew the captain's face from somewhere, after what seemed like an age but was probably only a few seconds, the captain jerked his head towards the saddle, and Lodreun fell like a sack.

The captain, seeing his natural ability as a fighter, didn't want to waste it, so called in a favor at an office above him and got his exiled status changed, so that he was now a normal peasant.The captain knew he would need Lodreun for any war that came up, he didn't do it for any other reason, day and night, Lodreun trained with the captain until he could beat him, the captain bowed his head and showed him the pommel of a dagger, which was supposedly handed down to him by King Enor Sheffield, so it was royal.Afterwards, Lodreun was accepted by the captain, and he was what Lodreun could now call his only friend, until they get sent out on a patrol together, when a group of wolves decided to attack, and drag his only friend into the distance, Lodreun tried to chase them, but failed, due to his leg being bitten only momentarily before, his sight blinded by fear, hate and depression, he set his sights away from home.

He now lives in Al'Khazar, relishing in the hard manual labor, although he's not treated well by the community, he tries his best to help them, and has few people who don't outright hate him, and even less that he could call his friends, but still he lives on, getting up every morning to get food and wood, he passes many people who spit and turn their noses up at him, he's learnt to ignore them but it still causes a pang of disappointment every-time it happens.But he's still hopeful, that one day people will like him, he continues training like the captain taught him, ready to fight in any war that comes about, he wants to prove to the world he can help, and that he will make a difference. When the time comes, he will be ready, when the time comes, the world will feel his blades icy steel touch.

-Character Age:

I am 16 years of age, sire.

-Character Appearance:

I am quite pale, not small or tall as such, I am around 5'11 and I am, without boasting, quite strong, but it's hidden muscle, I am not as big as others.

-Character Personality:

I am a cold, uncaring person but deeply troubled by my feelings, I'm quite a loner to tell the truth,I can't fit in with many people since they just disown me, but I've never known it any different, although, I have a little secret, I can deal with animals quite effectively, I dream daily of being able to talk to society, and not feel like I have been disowned, rejected and away from society.

-Your ambitions:

To be accepted by everyone in my kingdom, it's the one thing I've never had that i'm curious about, everyone's despises me, I would love for them to accept me, maybe even smile occasionally.

-Can your character read or write?:

No, I cannot, I was exiled quite early on in my life, I never had chance to.

-Can your character mine?:

I can, I had to learn to do everything from an early age, this is one of those things.

-Are you a capable builder?

Yes, I had to build my own house and things to decorate it, of sorts.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes, I can wield a sword, fighting creatures is easier done with one of those!

-Enjoy Farming?:

I don't enjoy it, no, but I assume i'm good at it, because I can quite easily get a decent harvest.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

He is strangely fast and resilient, probably due to his rough upbringing.

-A screenshot of your skin:

In the thumbnails.

-Other Information:

Thank you for reading my Application.Farewell!

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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