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Arcane Displacement | Addition


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ADDED REDLINE

Upon conducting a voyage, once per month a Planeswalker may request for an ST-Approved item brought from a realm within the multiverse. As a guideline, these items;

 

-Cannot be of magical nature, or be enchanted.

-Cannot retain written or imbued esoteric information upon lore whatsoever. (E.g. A book about Azdromoth)

-Must be comparable to mundane materials and cannot exceed them. (E.g. An item made of a strange type of wood would remain as durable as regular wood)

-Cannot have advantageous CRP mechanics, and must maintain an aesthetic function.

-Require substantial proof of RP conducted for their acquisition through a forum post.

-Require to be identified via [Planeswalking Item] on its description. 

 

ITEM EXAMPLES

-An unmelting star-shaped pendant made of a peculiar variant of ice. | Sleet

-A head-sized lemon which, when squeezed, would endlessly produce lemonade. | Souverni

-A crystallized bee-shaped piece of honey that constantly emits an annoying ‘buzz’. | Xicohtli

-A mechanical pipe that, when inhaled, would emulate the effects of a cigar. | Mechina

-A palm-sized foot that harmlessly hops around on its own.| Stench

 

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While the concept is cool, I think the page itself needs major improvement. One: WAY more lore and explanation of what this is. 2: Wouldn't an endless lemonade machine be magical? 3: You should change the name I think because even if it is not the same magic, Arcane displacement sounds a lot like a rip-off of voidal translocation. Other than that, it sounds pretty cool! (It would be so fun to bring back the wackiest items from the depths of the multiverse lol)

 

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2 minutes ago, Salmon Fry said:

While the concept is cool, I think the page itself needs major improvement. One: WAY more lore and explanation of what this is. 2: Wouldn't an endless lemonade machine be magical? 3: You should change the name I think because even if it is not the same magic, Arcane displacement sounds a lot like a rip-off of voidal translocation. Other than that, it sounds pretty cool! (It would be so fun to bring back the wackiest items from the depths of the multiverse lol)

 

 

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Oh sorry. I misunderstood that that this was an addition to another magic. (Kind of obvious in retrospect hence the giant "addition" in the title). But Yeah this sounds really cool!

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4 hours ago, Gustando said:

-A mechanical pipe that, when inhaled, would emulate the effects of a cigar. | Mechina

This would be a very epic edition.

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6 hours ago, Gustando said:

 

-A head-sized lemon which, when squeezed, would endlessly produce lemonade. | Souverni

 

Lemongrab is Horrifying : r/adventuretimeFlashback GIFs | Tenor

 

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Amendments/Additions implemented into main lore post. Thank you for your submission. Moving to correct subforum to prevent redundancy and clutter.

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