draconainmaster's second application

[dragonrider 0]

Minecraft Account Name:draconainmaster

-How old are you?: 11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: usa

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:YES

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: always looking for adventure, love danger,and always am daring for a fight. i love being a teen charachter. like to mine, herd, farm & FIGHT!!!

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:about 7-14 hours a week

-How long have you played minecraft?: about a few weeks, give or take.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:i know ALOT about roleplaying. roleplaying is using your imagination to a ceirtain extent, and playing the role of a charachter.usually it consits of people using words, or actions, to tell a story. i roleplay ALL THE TIME!! me and my bro think of like,3-10 diferent roleplaying stories per month.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:a medevil server, filled with action, roleplaying(duh), and a world of many nations

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i have played on softegg, which i left, for

it was to small and i am doubtful you can farm in it, or have a ranch. i also played in mutt’s world and citycraft, wich i left due to little,or no building space

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:yes

-Name the 4 races on this server.they are humans,elves,dwarves and orcs

-How did you hear about us?:my brother

-Did you vote?:i think so,but if i did not, i would vote

-What was your favourite Law?:i am stuck between no griefing and no stealing, because i have had people steal from me, and my house once was griefed.

-What was your least favourite Law?:all laws are important, but i don’t like the architexture rule, for i am not the best builder when i am being rushed when the sun is setting

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?dragonrider

In-Character:

-Character Name:Elrond Telemmaitë

-What is your Race?:elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:draconainmaster

-Biography: I was a happy elf when i was a kid. I lived a happy childhood, training, and studying. I favored the bow-and-arrow, but still liked swords a good amount. I loved those days. Although i did have a soft spot, my weakness, you could say. It was people that were sad, or crying. I could be like the the most energetic person Agies, dashing at full speed but if i saw someone crying i would STOP, DEAD in my tracks. i hated (and still hate) saddness. To me, saddness was like the black plague. I chould NOT stand it! I usually do everything i could to help someone sad, unless they CLEARLY want to be left alone. I hoped i chould someday destroy all sadness forever. But, enough about that. As i said, i had a great childhood, until i was 11. That was when it went downhill. My family went on a trip to trade with the humans. But some Orcs heard they had valueble items. So my family was killed, and to keep the house, i had to tend to it. And having a house AND a ranch, i will say, isn't easy. But, it tought me how to farm. I also had to fend off monsters, so i grew better whith the sword and my archery improved. By the time i was 15, i was found by the same orcs that killed my parents. I lost, and i was captured, and i was forced to do hard labor for a year. I now knew how TRUE saddness felt. I had to escape. After i heard the Orcs that killed my parents where EXTREMELY wanted criminals, who make people work, then after 1-2 years, the orcs kill them and capture someone else. I fashioned a sword and bow (you would be suprised how much materials i find when i work for a year), then at night, i set off. i made it halfway to my old home when they found me. all 10 of them found me. i thought quick and stabbed the first one, and in the confusion got to the top of a hill. There i shot 3 more with arrows, and ran as fast as i could. They quickly caught up, but i used my bow untill there was 2 left, then i ran out of arrows. my sword was broken, and i thought it was the end. then to my luck i saw some endermen. HA HA! I made sure that the orcs looked right at them, then... The endermen attacked them! i was in luck. the orcs were dead, and i had gotten home safe. That is my biography.

-Character Age:17

-Character Appearance:elvish

-Character Personality:heroic, loves to work with others

-Your ambitions:be a powerful elf, and explore all of lore ,and reign victorious over all evil!!!

-Can your character read or write?:i write as good as you see here, but in Real Life i stink with neatly writing

-Can your character mine?:not really, i can mine if a mine is prepared

-Are you a capable builder?: i can make a very small fort the best, but i usually make alot of my buildings underground, to save material

-Can you wield a sword?:I LOVE SWORDS and can weild one with ease

-Enjoy Farming?:yes

-Does your character have any special skills?:alot of courage, and usually never stops till the job is done

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: I LOVE LORD OF THE CRAFT, and accually do have a soft spot for crying-people.

[Blawharag 277]

#1 If Orcs are going to maim your family you need to read up on their lore. There hasn't been an Orc in history who put a prisoner to hard labor for a year. I would shy you away from the "Orphaned by Orcs" background however. It is extremely hard to get accepted with this highly generic and volatile background. You need to show you have a clear understanding of both Orc lore and server rules (particularly those regarding no-RP killing) before you ever hope to stand a chance.

#2 Why is your elf a capable builder? And why does he prefer subterranean structures other than material conservation? In addition to all this needing to be explained you seem to be mixing OOC into the IC section of the app.