Glcorpmembers 2nd App Attempt

[Glcorpmember 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: cjmckelvie

-How old are you?:17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States Eastern Standard

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, I am human however and do make mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a senior in high school. I hope to become a teacher when I graduate from college. I enjoy role playing games on both virtual and table top platforms.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I cant really give one for the school year but i usually play as often as possible so ill say 12 hours

-How long have you played Minecraft?:5 months

-What do you know about role-playing?: Role Playing is the art of story telling where each member of the group's story takes on the personality of their character they created and travel throughout the realm of the story completing adventures and quests all the time expanding their knowledge, Experiences, and Personalities too. I have played D&D for over a year and have written my own story involving original characters.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the server to be great, since I enjoy RPing to a great extent I love bringing a character to life within the lore

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: smp.mintyfreshcreepers.net I still play it

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server:Elfs , Orcs , Humans, Dwarves

-How did you hear about us?:My friend Casus told me about your server

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Glcorpmember

In-Character:

-Character Name:Arach

-What is your Race?: Elf sub race wood elf

-Biography: Arach was born on a settlement out in the wild where he learned the basic skills of survival he learned to hunt, track, and could also hold his own in scuffles with his two older brothers Ceadmon and Drasil he spent free time reading or Practicing archery in a small range he built for himself out in the forest. Arach was content with his way of life until one day he came home to discover his home burned to ashes his families corpses charred skeletons sitting remains of what had once been the sitting room. His family now gone and buried by his own hands Arach set off on a mission of revenge any way possible for he knew the culprits of this horrible deed. Those once living the Undead. Ceadmon and Drasil are still in a way with him before they died they each gave him a pendant that he now wears about his neck and will keep with him until Justice has been served. His Journey led him out of the wilderness ,where his families farm had been, to the elf capital Laurelin were he has heard of the warden the military of the Elves his hopes are to become the greatest warden and avenge his family.

-Character Age:180

-Character Appearance:Arach looks like a typical Wood-Elf

-Character Personality: Arach is easily distracted, strong willed, and highly opinionated. However he is also kindhearted and he will stick by his friends and allies no matter what the risk to him may be. He can be loud at times but is dead serious in a fight those who threaten his friends instantly get on his bad side and though he is kindhearted afterwards some people cannot be forgiven until they have learned their lesson in his opinion.

-Your ambitions: Ascend the ranks of the warden and become a trusted leader while also avenging his family

-Can your character read or write? Arach can both read and write and enjoys the reading aspect but he detests writing simply because it seems pointless to him

-Can your character mine?: He prefers to mine over building and farming but does it mearly to benefit others not himself

-Are you a capable builder?: He can build simple buildings and objects but not much else though

-Can you wield a sword?: Fairly decent however he is still sub par

-Enjoy Farming?: I DESPISE FARMING!!!!

-Does your character have any special skills?: (( i dont really know what to put here))

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.planetmin...kin/elf-243205/

-Other Information: Does not impact your application.

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short or needs more detail.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/