waggys application for LOTC the most popular RP server

[waggy1999 0]

Out-Of-Character:Dylan Wagstaff

-Minecraft Account Name:WAGGY1999 (Hense the last name wagstaff)

-How old are you?: 12 (Coming 13)

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:A tall blonde dude who likes going out at day and gaming at night

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:5o hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:7 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:Ive been RPing for along time now in WOW and lord of the rings online its where you create an alternate yo in a fantasy world and meet up with other characters to do quests

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Very good good staff and necessary pluggins

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Citycraft survival i left because it was boring and repetative

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:yes i have

-Name the 4 races on this server.Orc Elf Dwarf and Human and certain subraces

-How did you hear about us?:Many research videos and websites

-Did you vote?:Yes all 3

-What was your favourite Law?:you must keep in character at all time

-What was your least favourite Law?:NONE

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?waggy1999

In-Character:

-Character Name:Ohiraden

-What is your Race?: orc

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:waggy1999

-Biography:Ohiraden was a healthy young orc with a loving family and 1 friend named Shouk who warned of an imminent attack which would never happen . . . Atleast they thought. at school his dad tought Geography and crafting his mum was a doctor who healed orcs from battles . he was use to getting what he wanted until the "impossible attack happened" at the time they lived to the north in a multicultural town but that was a fatal mistake they was in sight of the undead army which was marching to the human capital to kill king perea his dad pulled out his sword and took the fight to the streets his mum held Ohiraden as he saw his dad burning to death outside his mum was shot by an arrow after the attack he knew he was being hunted and whent to Shouks house to find him packing up supplies to leave "where are going" he said to shouk "Krugmar the orc war nation" explained Shouk

"let me come with you" Ohiraden begged ill . . . ill use my dads staff i know some spells

"fine" Shouk grunted "lets move" after there journey they reached krugmar to find a guard watching the gate "can we come in" they pleaded

"not yet" the guard shouted you must reach the warehouse and bring back some food and supplies and then maybe"

they agreed "we will be right back" they headed to the warehouse and grabbed the spplies "here" they said "take it" whilst the gate opened a whole new life had opened to them of fighting and raiding they realised this was there destiny.

-Character Age:25

-Character Appearance:shaman

-Character Personality:Vengefull

-Your ambitions:to join the ascended and destroy undead forts

-Can your character read or write?:yes

-Can your character mine?:no

-Are you a capable builder?yes

-Can you wield a sword?:yes

-Enjoy Farming?:no

-Does your character have any special skills?:]yes spells

-A screenshot of your skinhttp:http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/21/20111109150120.png/

-Other Information:[/b

[waggy1999 0]

my u key is hard to press so excuse me for not putting u on sometimes

hope this isnt a problem

[Blawharag 277]

#1 Your answer to the "Knowledge of Roleplay" question is lacking. Please look up a definition of roleplay and provide a more accurate definition.

#2 Your bio needs work. You fail to explain why you can preform magic, who taught you ect. you write your race is Orc, but in the bio you refer to yourself as a dwarf. Your knowledge of Krugmar and Orc society is also shady at best. We do not turn people away at Fort Krug because we need supplies from a warehouse. A warehouse you found without any information pertaining to its whereabouts, or what supplies you would be retrieving or why the Orcs were incapable of retrieving it themselves.

#3 You IC question answers are too short and need elaboration and detail

Please do not repost your application within 48 hours. Take this time to expand upon your character, proof-read your application, read up on server lore and rules and fix the problems listed above.