My 2th application [Khodan]

[khodan 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Khodan

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT+1

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I always loved to play Sandbox games, i started with Garrys mod until i heard about Minecraft.

Minecraft is amazing and i also love to role play so it is a win win situation then, right?

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 4-6 hours

-How long have you played Minecraft?: Since Minecraft Alpha

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: I started to roleplay when i was 9 or 10, and that age i started to play World of Warcraft. My cousin explained to me how to roleplay and stuff and i loved to do it, even though i sucked hard at it.

I still roleplay in World of Warcraft and i am better in it ofcourse, and i would love to roleplay here because i love minecraft and i love to roleplay so yeah, what do i want more?

I also played RP games like Morrowind, Oblivion and Skyrim.

Roleplay is when you take the roles of imaginary characters, and acts like you are that character.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I will expect that the server will have a nice community and that it will be fun to play in this server.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on much servers but i didn't like them.

I am sure that i will like this server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i did read and i did understand the rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Elf, Dwarf and Orc

-How did you hear about us?: Signature

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Khodan

In-Character:

-Character Name:Varian

-What is your Race?:Human

-Biography: Varian was a kid with rich parents.

He and his parents had a nice and big house in Oren.

Varian had to work with his dad on the farm, they sell vegetables, fruit and meat.

Varian has to work every day on the farm, when he is done he would do reading and writing lessons and after that he would train with his sword he got at his birthday and his 2 daggers he found in the woods.

When he turned 18 his dad died of Leprosy.

The last words his dad said to him is to take care of his mother.

Even though Varian was 18, he cried the whole day.

At the age of 20 his mom died because of pneumonia.

Varian knew life was hard and that he can only try to make it better.

He stayed at the house and the farm until the age of 22.

He sold the house and the farm.

Varian grabbed his sword and his 2 daggers.

He was ready to move on, to explore the world and to make the best of his life.

After days of traveling he finally saw the Landcleaver Mountain.

He was ready to live the fullest of his life.

-Character Age: 22

-Character Appearance: Like this http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111119131614/elderscrolls/images/thumb/3/34/ThGuAr5.jpg/294px-ThGuAr5.jpg without being a cat of course.

-Character Personality: Varian is a nice guy, but if someone makes his mad then you can count on it that you will get some hard punches in the face.

-Your ambitions: To live the fullest of his life.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes he was a rich kid, he can read and he can write.

-Can your character mine?: Varian never bothered to mine, he had a farm to run with his mom and dad.

-Are you a capable builder?: Varian builded a tree house in the woods, alone.

Varian is a capable builder yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, he trained every day with his sword.

-Enjoy Farming?: Varian can farm but he didn't enjoy to farm, he prefered to play with his sword and his 2 daggers.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes he is handy with his sword and 2 daggers.

-A screenshot of your skin:http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/265/naamloosrm.png/

-Other Information: My IRL name is Kenny and i live in Holland.

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Posted my first application 19november

Posted this application 21november.

Timespan 2 days.

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[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography (you need to develop your biography a bit more) and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... Also you need to explain your character traits in terms of your character, why can he mine? why can he fight or not etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned.