Attempt #3

[darktoes 0]

Here I go!

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: darktoes

-How old are you?: 12

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm not very fit and spend most of my time on the computer, I like reading and enjoy learning things about most topics. I'm very mature and make jokes often. I run my own server but have been meaning to try this one for a while.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Uh... Maybe... 15 hours? If I really like it. Of course if our quota runs out it will go to about 0 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since mid-alpha.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I understand that roleplaying is the art(?) of pretending to be someone else and reacting to situations and other RPers in a way that would reflect the way your character would handle it, althpugh I notice that although I haven't seen the RP channel there is a HUGE amont of people on the OOC channel. The only actual server I played where we were roleplaying was on a server that I left soon after we started roleplaying. It was just some basic stuff, mostly revolving around our different personalities and roles in a small town we set up.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I played as a ghost for a while and it looks like a lot of fun, although as in most servers I find that the RP is a little slack and most of the buildings are modern or... just plain weird, but there's nothing wrong with that, it makes it more fun!!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played Creeperville (R.I.P), because the admin was a meanie. Sparkcraft because the admin was a meanie. Octavian, still playing but I think it's dead. The Kingdom Of Creepers, my own server. A few others but I can't think of them off hand.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Human

-How did you hear about us?: I don't remember, it was like a month ago but I only got around to applying today.

-Did you vote?: Yes, on all 3 websites.

-What was your favourite Law?: No destroying of the worlds landscape. I think a minecraft world is a beautiful thing to be cherished, why would you want to hack big hunks out?

-What was your least favourite Law?: You must have a forum account, I don't like registering for things that I don't know much about, but it seems OK.. for now.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? darktoes.

In-Character:

-Character Name: Eric Cantwell

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: http://www.lordofthe...28043-darktoes/

-Biography: Born (20 years prior to present date) under the sign of the Hoe and the Bowl (Symbolizing hard work and providing for yourself and your family), in the city of Al'Khazar. His parents Gavan Cantwell, his father, a loyal and hard-working father capable of providing for his family and able to send his son to school. And Dianna Cantwell, his mother, always with a smile and a wave for any passing friends or just random strangers, with a heart of gold and some of the best cooking in Aegis she loved her husband and son dearly. He took after his mother in many ways but always found that his father's advice was always sound and that he could teach him more about the world then his mother. A few good words to describe him would be: kind, generous, hard-working, strong, goon-natured, helpful and friendly.

His parents were killed in a fire the day before he turned 20, he never knew what happened but suffice to say that he didn't think it was an accident. He grieved for the next few days and was helped by some family friends, he stayed with them for a few days helping on their farm but soon felt the thirst for adventure and danger, and so now, his story begins to unfold.

-Character Age: 20

-Character Appearance: A farmer in appearance only, with his bright cheery grey eyes, dark brown hair to his simple tunic and breeches with a leather vest, although on the inside he feels the need to explore dangerous lands as all young men do but also knows that he should attempt to settle down somewhere and start his own farm.

-Character Personality: Loyal and hard working, well learned but prone to angry outbursts.

-Your ambitions: To run a nice farm and hopefully get some hired help at some point.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes.

-Can your character mine?: No.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes, very much so.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Good with plants and animals but can wield a sword well to protect himself and his property.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: I originally posted my first application a few months ago but was rejected, a few weeks ago I rewrote my application but it still hasn't been reviewed, I PMed a few people about it but never got an answer. I figure it would just be easiest to repost it on the forums.

[Trouvo 205]

DENIED

Considering you copy and pasted it from your previous applications and have only shortened your bio without taking into account the critique given to you by previous reviewers. You are missing 19 years of your characters life, you state that his parents died, when you were 13, in an "accidental" fire and go to live with friends then a few days later you, a farmer, find a thirst for adventure and your story starts? when your age on the application states you are 32? Also it does not make sense for a farmer "through and through" to have a thirst for adventure....

Also you do not answer the question in regards to what you believe RP to be, which is an important aspect to our server, please either research what it means to Role Play or give your full answer as to what it is(answer either way), and flesh out your bio more and properly set your character goals and skills based on who your character is

[darktoes 0]

DENIED

Considering you copy and pasted it from your previous applications and have only shortened your bio without taking into account the critique given to you by previous reviewers. You are missing 19 years of your characters life, you state that his parents died, when you were 13, in an "accidental" fire and go to live with friends then a few days later you, a farmer, find a thirst for adventure and your story starts? when your age on the application states you are 32? Also it does not make sense for a farmer "through and through" to have a thirst for adventure....

Also you do not answer the question in regards to what you believe RP to be, which is an important aspect to our server, please either research what it means to Role Play or give your full answer as to what it is(answer either way), and flesh out your bio more and properly set your character goals and skills based on who your character is

Oh for heavens sake, first I stuff it up completely, then it's too long, then it's too short MAKE UP YOUR MINDS!!!

Ok, I've tried to fix everything and take all you said into account, in 48 hours I'll try one more time but if I get denied again for any major reasons I'm gonna give up, I'm obviously not cut out for this stuff.